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This would-be speed painting totally kicked my ass for 3 hours straight from every imaginable direction. I wanted it to appear as if it were raining, at night and this huge mechanical monstuosity was slowly making its way down through the heavy clouds. It doesn't look like it's raining IMO, and the clouds look strange. But at least there's a mechanical something there.

Critique is most welcome.



[edit] Thanks infinity, now i know at least that worked. I'm going to, after a rather extensive and eye-opening critique by Frost, re-do this piece. Spending more time and working in a larger resolution (and paying more attention during the start) will hopefullly produce something i'm more content with. I'll post the NewAndImproved version when it gets finished.

If any of the moderators spots this, could you please move it to WIP or just lock it? I'm very sorry for the inconvenience.
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[Infinity]

I would say you succeeded....

first thing I thought was "ugghhh it's raining!"
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moep