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lomo
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me still new in coloring.. still need some practice 
here it goes .. my better piece
this is carnage...
and the sole survivor (hehe... juz a close up onli)
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haohmaru
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| Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 5:30 pm |
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-sorry, doublepost.
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haohmaru
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| Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 5:31 pm |
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hmm. i think a wider range of colors would really help this picture.
you could use some green, red, yellow in places without losing the fitting overall blue color scheme.
just a thought, sorry if that wasn't helpful at all.
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| Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 5:47 pm |
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I like it but I think that the image could use a lot more contrast to everything but the clouds
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| Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 7:38 pm |
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It's moody...I like it.
The color range kind of maintains the mood, I don't know if I'd change it if I were you. The limited palette acutally helps the atmosphere imo.
The only real crit I have, besides the fact that all the destruction and carnage is a little hard to comprehend (I"m guessing that was your intention though, we're not supposed to actually be able to tell where one corpse ends and the other begins), is the face a little to the left and down of the main character. It just distracted me. Maybe it's the color (or maybe it's just me), but it seems to draw the focus from the main character. Also, just a suggestion.
I like pictures that tell a story. Good job! 
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lomo
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| Posted: Wed Jan 22, 2003 2:58 am |
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hi guys.. thankz for viewing and comments...
the settings for this piece is
"one living... a mass killings.. foods for the crows.. dwellers of the sky counting... stench of iron, metal, blood and sweat..."
the work is suppose to be done in monotone to bring out the chaos and the atmosphere...
thou i had put a little little bit of orange on the armor..
i understand it is a bit hard to focus.. sorri guys...
maybe u can view the 1st piece see it as a scene
the 2nd piece as a character piece..
thankz guys..
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| Posted: Wed Jan 22, 2003 4:16 am |
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The kid looks like he'd be the first one killed... he looks so young and innocent. How'd he survive? 
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| Posted: Wed Jan 22, 2003 4:27 am |
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very nice ..
the closeup show the realquality of work
very emotional and good colors ....
so cold ..
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| Posted: Wed Jan 22, 2003 5:38 pm |
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thats awsome i like it.. must stink down there!
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| Posted: Wed Jan 22, 2003 5:54 pm |
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I like it...er...yeah.
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