[bM]

Hey friends,
thanks for all great ccs and comments in both wip and here when i released first version. I have know finished my first landscape painting.

Made in Photoshop, using a intuios a4.
~15 hours, almost all in one night.


Enjoy.

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- Nicklas Forsberg a.k.a bM
- http://www.nalf.se

[the_insider]

hello---i like it for the most part---you have a very unique style and this doesn't look like like photoshop though--it looks like a painting :)

but anyway i have a few comments....
----first i think the black in some of the areas takes away from the environment---in some parts i like it but towards the bottom of the waterfall the black is over-powering--maybe add some rocks or something??

----next...i thought towards the top-left of the piece it starts to look flat since you have trees and such then all of a sudden there's SKY---the right top side is done much better since you gave the trees body instead of just a wall of green like on the left

----last..there probably would be A LOT more fog or mist at the bottom of the waterfall---thats pretty much it --you seem to have a good sense of color and i especially like the plants towrd the middle that intercept the waterfall---keep it up!i
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[Capt. Fred]

I agree mostly with insider.

firstly, I'm can't get the perspective. Is it like the light area at the top is sky becuase we are looking up at the waterfall/cliff edge, or is like that area is the river from above and the whole pic's got a very 'telehpoto' perspective or is it somehwere between the two.

And then there's the lack of mist. And also the water has a certain glow/luminace which is by no means, necesarilly a bad effect.

I repeat mostly what's been said just so you know that more than one person thinks these things..