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cptoonz · Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 1:30 pm

Howdy,

Well, I did this work for a different mod from Shattered Oasis, and due to various sundry circumstances, uhh, mum is the word (as far as the mod itself). Anyway, there is nothing particularly earth shattering as these concepts go, but I would appreciate any C&C on the art, regardless. Thank you Smile

click if image is bOrken
pencil sketch of above said image.
pencil sketch of a BAD guy
pencil sketch of a GOOD guy
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SuperFluidity · junior member Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2003 Posts: 4

That's really cool. I really like the design. I haven't really put boots on, or maybe she's in a hurry, but the pants seem to be caught up where the boots are.

Not sure if you meant to do it, but for some reason that really sticks out in my mind.
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AndyT · Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 3:11 pm

Seems you draw and paint a lot lately Very Happy

! The cloth and boots are stunning. Are these concepts completely from imagination or do you use refs?

C&C!? If it's not what you are going for just ignore me Wink

. The head bothered me a little. Maybe because I tried to imagine what the neck must look like. Pretty long and thin and too much like an ideal cylinder ... I made the face bigger (in case you didn't notice Wink

). If you want to stick to short hair maybe think about desaturating the color.

Guess most is a matter of taste only!

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AndyT · Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 7:22 am

And btw. I really like the Anti-Terrorist Concept!
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cptoonz · Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 9:29 am

SuperFluidity,
Thanks for the C&C. Well, I see what you mean. I intended to have the pants looked "bloused" in the boot tops, as its called. Not sure that I pulled that off, though. Regardless, I appreciate the comps and crits Smile

Andy,
Hey, thanks Smile

I appreciate the paint over. I see what you are saying on her butt and her head does look a little small. Well, the client was pretty specific on the butch hair cut. Good idea on the desatch! Uhm, I have to be honest, though, you made her look like "Barbara Billingsly* goes Al Queada"...or something Laughing

uhm, sorry that just popped out there. Anyway, thanks for the C&C and I am glad you like the "good" guy Very Happy

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AndyT · Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 9:42 am

You are right. Loomis beauties and military ... that doesn't go together too well. But wasn't there a woman in the 3rd part of Indiana Jones ...? Wink

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cptoonz · Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 8:37 pm

Yes, you mean the "Last Crusade"? Yep, and she was quite a hottie, too...not sure how military she was, but what the heck Wink

Thanks for the C&C, regardless Smile

Oops, I missed your question the last time, sorry about that. For this I used no photo refs, but the client had some pics of video-game models to give me the idea of what he wanted. I put my own spins on it, and he seemed to dig it. Smile

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