[eyalyab]

it's probably hard to understand what's in this freak-pic so the explanation is below the drawing..

its me drinking tea out of a mug. i wear glasses and in here- a woolen hat. actually its cotton but i dont know how to say that in english.
the heating doesnt work and im freezing my ass off so i made tea. bah.. back to the explanation:
the whole area on the left is dead view area. its being blocked by my nose and eyebrow. i was only looking through my right eye.
its hard to make out from the scrappy sketch but try dammit!! ;]
C&c's always welcome of course.

[AndyT]

The first thought that I had was that the tiled floor looks good .
I get that it's not the floor now (just in case that wasn't clear).
Wouldn't the glasses be fogging up (don't know how to say that in English) when you look directly into the mug? Is there a reflection of a staircase?

Well I like the idea! Guess the part that's not seen through the glasses will be blurry? The reflection is the part that's supposed to get the attention, right? Not sure about the hat ... didn't find anything hat related in the sketch. Maybe I didn't get it at all? Is there a reflection of your face?

You ask for C&C and get questions ... how mean is that
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[eyalyab]

lol. lmao from your reply
well, in case it isnt clear, (okay okay its not clear at all!) its a reflection of my face in the tea.
ill explain: the tea mug is on the table near the computer (its on the corner of the table). im bending my back and looking inside the tea. i close my left eye like a retard and open my right one. the left of the image is not seen cuz my nose is blocking the right eye's view. the floor tiling is gonna be void space. oh and i have a sock-hat on it was cold.
about the steam in the glasses. welp, there was some at the beginning but it took me so damn long to draw this (like 30 minutes for this terrible sketch) that the tea got cold and no more steam in my glasses
now my back hurts from bending for so long and my right eye is blind from the steam. i became a tea-mutant.

[AndyT]

Now I'm really confused. Could you draw some illustrations (different views) or have someone take a picture of you in that position?
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[eyalyab]

lol.. sorry no camera. ill just quick paint it. maybe the colors will help.

[eyalyab]

maybe this is better understandable..

C&C's much appreciated!

[AndyT]

I C! My bad ... I thought bending backwards. You wrote "...bending my back...".
Guess I'm tired ... everybody ignore my comments

Should turn out great. But it's possible that most people won't appreciate it!
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[Awetopsy]

dont get stuck on the face from "this side of the reflection.. in fact you can minimize it as much as possible.. , in reality, you dont see that much of the inside of your face, so get rid of most of it.

Seeing the tip of the nose and the glasses gets the point across well enough.

good luck with this one.. Its a very cool idea.

[eyalyab]

thanks everyone for the comments and crits.
about cropping the image void dark space, you are right.
but i had a different idea for it in mind (thank you for the effort though): well, its my head right? so i though of drawing there what's going in my head.. lightning, clouds.. well- a storm. this way i'd be aiming at the title i wanted for this idea "storm in a tea cup"- and there would be sort of a double reflection: me reflecting in the tea and the storm redlecting in my brain

tell me what you think

[AndyT]

It sounds very ambitious! I think the idea is great and you proved already that you can actually put ideas into practice.
But I think this is not going to be easy. Wish you luck though
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