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nenne · Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 6:01 pm

I hate laudry don�t you?
First post here Smile

Painted in painter. C/C is welcome.

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bM · Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 6:10 pm

Hey Nenne, fantastic work as always.
You are one of my favorite digital artists.

Och att du �r fr�n Sverige g�r inte saken s�mre Smile

Keep the skill up.
Btw, why this subject? Smile

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aColdOldKodiak · Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 6:16 pm

very nice. Great work
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xmmx · Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 6:19 pm

wow great work
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eyalyab · Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 6:32 pm

very very nice! welcome (i think im too new here to say that)

laundry sucks, yup. i just did mine a few hours ago. someone should invent clothes that dont need cleaning.

btw, so many artists from sweden. its a nation that spawns infinate digital artists, so it seems. lots of swedish digital artists on irc too.

nenne · Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 6:55 pm

Thanxs

*blush*
eyalyab:
The person who invent clothes that dont need cleaning wold be rich (why can�t I invent that?) Wink

Don�t know why its so many Swedes Very Happy

But I don�t complains Very Happy

bM:
Hi Oh im werry happy you like my paintings Smile

Why the subject ? Im in love with the old masters and I remember one painting who did have that as a subject so I wanted to do one to in my way ofcorse, and had a exuse to not do the laundry Wink

Still its a good practis to.
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Lunatique · Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 8:33 pm

Nice one! The wooden closet's coloring seems a bit dull compared to the great variation of colors everywhere else.

Basement bound · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 12:57 am

Welcome- just noticed one thing. There is a shadow from a brush mark in the background that is coming down from just above her left brow and comes down past the right side of her lips. Layering problem perhaps. Really well done otherwise.
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Turokess · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 8:27 am

Lovely work here. I can see that you really do like the old masters paintings. When I first saw it I thought it looked very classical. Love her face. I might agree with Lunatique that it would look nice if the background were a bit more vivid. Perhaps darker too? Very nice work. Wink

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-HoodZ- · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 8:47 am

i have to agree with Luna...the closet looks a bit out of place....

Kitamard · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 10:09 am

The closest doesnt look out of place its just a bit dull. You should work in it a little bit . Wink

very nice job though
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Dan · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 2:11 pm

they did invent that. Someone is making teflon suits that u can spill stuff on and it just slides right off. But I think they run high on the price scale
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Inspector Lee · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 2:24 pm

Very Nice. She can do my laundry anytime. Smile

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Malachi Maloney · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 3:06 pm

Nicely done. Smile

But I gotta agree with Luna on the dresser/closet/wood-thing. It's rendered very well, but it lacks color variation.

Other than that, me likes. Smile

~M~
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nenne · Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2003 8:38 pm

Thanxs al for C/C I think it did get better now, did read al advices se if I read well Very Happy

Thanxs al I did presiate it alot Smile

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marc_taro · Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 5:09 am

Very nice brushwork - almost looks like oils...compositionally speaking, I'm not sure about those two parallel lines on the left side. Too close to the edge. I liked the background from the orginal Smile

Good work!
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Torstein Nordstrand · Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 5:40 am

Nice and fresh! Colours, dress, time and woman remind me of a very good film called "Quills" with Kate Winslet. Maybe the art directors were influenced by the same Masters?
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Al Ian · Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 7:28 am

The contrast and composition in the new image are a ton better!! I'm very impressed!! Keep up the great work Smile

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nenne · Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 7:42 am

marc_taro: Thanxs I have struggled with the composition a while and I just can�t get it to look qvite okej, this was the best I culd do so I leave it with that for now.. might look at it after a cuppel of month *s*

Torstein Nordstrand: Yes I have bean told abouth it before at EK and it is possibel that I have taken influens of a movie becuse I do look at movies alot Smile

Thanxs evrybody for the help I got.
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faeklone · Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 9:12 pm

Not to be overly criticial or anything, as I like the picture itself, but I think you've used too much black in this piece. especially in her face. It looks a bit odd. Oh, and she has 5:00 shadow. Other than that I'm eager to see the end product.