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zcomic · junior member Member # Joined: 18 Jan 2003 Posts: 2

SteelStorm · Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 1:56 am

Yah yah great work, especially like the second one (not a huge anime fan, though you did a good job).

The light on his cape thing in the second one is excellent.
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Simoom · Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 7:04 pm

I actually like the first one, nice lighting and water color look to it. I don't see anythinng to crit about it honestly... anatomy seems good to me on both, and I like the oldschool manga/comic book style to both of them, respectively. Your line art on the first one is particularly descriptive with the shading, that's why I like it. Post more Razz

aphelionart · Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2003 9:25 pm

I like it as well, though not a huge fan of anime either. The only comment I have is that on the second pic, maybe add some glow from that fire bouncing off the edge of the cave? It seems bright enough that it would appear among the cool highlights above it.
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JZ · junior member Member # Joined: 20 Jan 2003 Posts: 4

ammm....about the first picture of the girl...the hair, the eye, and the shape of the face looks alot like the work of an japanese comic artist. Twisted Evil

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Al Ian · Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2003 9:12 am

On the last one, the background obviosly isant done. But damn, the skin, the hair, the earing. Dude, that is awsome!!! The lips and eyes especialy stand out! Talant, pure talant!
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Max · Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 8:43 am

Your work is very cool.

The first one is by far my favourite. It shows great emotion and looks...well, just lovely. You have choosen nice colors also.
I would define some of the shapes in her face and on her shirt abit more/better.
A good name for it would be sunshine...first which came to my mind when I saw it.

In the second one the main problem is the line between out and in the holde. It's the lightning which doesn't fit at this place exactly.
Also look an the style you want to achieve. For example some parts in the pic are nice detailed, some others not.
You can fix that. I like it anyway.

I totally agree with JZ on the last one. It looks very cool.
Just fix the hair and BG, maybe the contrast of the earring is abit too high...but just maybe
Nice overal look

Great work and keep it up

Awetopsy · Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2003 8:47 am

I really like teh first one... very nice.