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| Posted: Fri Jan 17, 2003 4:18 pm |
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Confusion of styles. Lineart Vs. "not lineart".
I know what I'm talking about, I do it constantly.
It just jumps at me. I would have preferred a completely inked drawing, including the smoke, or a drawing whithout outlines all together.
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| Posted: Fri Jan 17, 2003 4:21 pm |
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that's pretty damn cool. These blue white things are confusing though. Aee they flying bullets or something?
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| Posted: Fri Jan 17, 2003 4:58 pm |
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hmm... why did you put a black field in the right corner?
i think it screws up the picture. |
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| Posted: Fri Jan 17, 2003 5:20 pm |
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I agree with Sukhoi, and I think you should go for all lineart. The quality and strenght seems stronger than with the un-outlined portions. And I too am confused about the black slice taken from the corner. The robot looks nice though
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| Posted: Fri Jan 17, 2003 6:37 pm |
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Confusion of styles. Lineart Vs. " Not lineart ".
If it is that this
is a picture it divides from my first one comic
Annotating suggestions thank you
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