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SteelStorm
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Wanted to try a grayscale thing!
A graduation portrait.
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MikeyS
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| Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2003 7:23 am |
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hey
woh  great greytones -your painting has a real classic look--awesome!!!
Maybe the ears should have a bit more detail-,i think they look too flat . |
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Capt. Fred
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| Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2003 7:32 am |
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Fantastic tone! yeah, great! Anatomy-wise i'm gonna offer a criticism...
Her right should -- to the left of the picture -- really troubles me. Bizarre looking. But indeed reality itself thows up some hard to digest visual phenomena so one musn't be too eagerto criticise on these issues. |
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Al Ian
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| Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2003 8:28 am |
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I agree with Capt. Fred on the anatomy. However, with that aside, the painting and rendering is top notch!! I love the idea of the picture, and shes BUFF which looks very realistic for a warrior chick as aposed to an anorexic ninja LOL.
Good job!
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Awetopsy
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| Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2003 8:33 am |
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it looks as though she's got some major pectoral muscles right above her breasts... Buff chicks are fine to tho..
the thing that bothers me the most is the top of the head.. the cranium should be a litle higher.... as to place her eyes half way up her head... anyways thats my $.02 |
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DL-44
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| Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2003 11:56 am |
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Beautiful work =)
The quality of your technique is fantastic.
As far as anatomy goes, I have only one issue - her right hand. The shoulder and the head(as mentioned before) seem a little odd, but not necessarily incorrect. Her hand, however, is a bit mutated - it appearsa as if her fingers are all the same length and width.
If that could be corrected, this would be just about a perfect piece =) |
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| Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2003 12:05 pm |
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I like the smoothness and shadings
but her nose is out of perspective....it makes the face seem weird
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sleepwalker
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| Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2003 2:52 pm |
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| Nice picture and very nice smoothness you got...I like, But I have to agree with above poster that the face seems a bit weird! |
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SteelStorm
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| Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2003 3:44 pm |
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Well these things shouldn't be too hard to fix.
I am just glad she doesn't require major surgery!
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Matthew
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| Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2003 4:32 pm |
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Is she an elf?
I like the muscles on her. |
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SteelStorm
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| Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2003 5:24 pm |
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Drow, actually, believe it or not. I portray them with complexions everything from pale to tan to black.
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