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pulpy ze brachypelman · Posted: Mon Jan 13, 2003 5:16 pm

there are many problems in this pic, but i'll try to fix before coloring... Smile

AndyT · Posted: Tue Jan 14, 2003 2:28 am

WOW great concept! I love the expressions. Maybe the right leg is a litte too long?
Can't wait to see it finished (or the next steps)!
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Ian Jones · Posted: Tue Jan 14, 2003 5:28 am

I agree with AndyT.

I like the whole ghetto chic feeling they have. Your lines are so clean too! very nice. Correct me if I'm wrong but I think you have some anatomy issues with the girl on the right. I'm guessing thats due to the fact you didn't rough out her whole body and any parts that were hidden by the frame?

Lets see more!

Zarathustra · Posted: Tue Jan 14, 2003 6:57 am

I agree, nice lines. Looks really clean. Funny concept. Is she riding a tricycle?

Some little things: The left arm of the seated girl should maybe have the elbow down in a more relaxed position, and there are some little perspective issues going on in a few places although one can hardly notice them and they could almost pass as a stylistic choice if the girls weren't so well drawn.

eyalyab · Posted: Tue Jan 14, 2003 9:37 am

nice concept
minor thing.. im not but i think her left foot is too wide.
i agree about the left albow needing to be bent down rather than up, unless that's supposed to do that.
also, i dont know if there are any shoes like that, but where is the rest of the platform? if she stand on that she falls ;]. maybe the flatform should hava an incline so her center of mass won't be right under the ankels.
im wandering into the too small details as usual..

anyway, i cant wait for the finished one..
btw, was this done in ps or illustrator? looks like vectors, so clean

pulpy ze brachypelman · Posted: Fri Jan 24, 2003 1:37 am

eyelab>> inked by my hand with a pen Smile

Reakshun · Posted: Mon Jan 27, 2003 9:41 pm

Long time no hear from...I see you've been working!!! Very Happy

These are some clean ass vectors...no doubt...and I see where your problems are...LOTS OF TANGENTS...whew!! Curious to see what you're going to do with that floor.

I feel a nice warm palette of pastels will do this just fine (opinion). I love the girls expression on the right and that contraption?! Is that one of your badboy sex toy thingies? Twisted Evil

Good luck! Get the finished up here, pronto!