Sijun Forums :: View topic - Anime-style guy with a sword..

Adonai · Posted: Fri Jan 10, 2003 10:12 am

hey guys, let me know what you think! just looking for some feedback on it.
thanks!

Al Ian · Posted: Fri Jan 10, 2003 10:29 am

My own opinion, which is normaly taken with a grain of salt, but here it goes.

Position and anatomy look realy good. The sword is very slick! (great styling) The hair seems a bit wierd, normaly the end of pony tails taper off, especialy when blowing in the wind. Seems kind of like its glewed in place. The painting shows very good depth, good shading. I think a background would very slick with this!!

Keep it up Smile

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Matthew · Posted: Fri Jan 10, 2003 10:50 am

I want to have that sword. Smile

keep it up
Matthew

Simoom · Posted: Fri Jan 10, 2003 11:14 am

Where's the materia fit in the sword? Wink

My only additional comment is that the shading on his chest seems a little too blurry.

cptoonz · Posted: Sun Jan 12, 2003 6:47 pm

Hi,

I like the action/and pose you have going on. You want to try a gray/neutral fill for the bg, however...coloring on white can confuse the eye (at least it does mine) Smile

The hair does seem a little stiff, it might help to have greater seperation on the hair strands towards the end of the pony tail. Nice work, keep it up!
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Adonai · Posted: Mon Jan 13, 2003 6:02 am

thanks for the comments guys, I knew the hair was kind of funky when I drew it.. was just wanting to get sort of a 'second opinion' on it.. Smile

thanks a ton guys!