[Nirox]

hi everyone...

I just finished this painting called
"Fortress down"



Took me longer then normal cause of all the detail..
but I know there are a lot of things wrong with it...
so please take the time to let me know whats's wrong with this image....
I want to improve myself!!!!

thanks everyone!
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~ Jorge "Nirox" M

[Tetra]

i think it's cool, i and i like the idea -but the perspective seems a little off

[Matthew]

I think it is the roof to the right which is confusing the picture, not sure though Very nice detail, especially on the plane

[ZeeWire]

I love the detail and texturing, amazing cracks & painterly feeling of the sky. The perspective seams to be off. The building in the back seams too flat and 2D looking as well as the trees.
My last comment is about the debris, it looks too solid and chunky almost too neat for such an accident, I would try to make it more random in placement and size, maybe adding big pieces of the wall as well as the smaller ones. Try looking for photographic reference, it always helps to make it more believable.

Keep up the good work!
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ZeeWire

>Art is the Blood from my Creative Soul.<

[Nirox]

thanks for the comments everyone

yes I have to work on my perspective...
but I dont think its so bad...ive only been painting on my computer for alittle under 2 months now

ive been studding a lot of online tutorials from the masters =)

ill only improve! =)

thanks again everyone
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~ Jorge "Nirox" M

[ABetterReality]

Love the Nazi propaganda flyer. One of my favorites.