[damppuppy]

Here's a character concept pic that I'm doing for a friend. I know that the lighting is not placed right in relation to the girl, but I'll fix that later. C&C would be appriciated. I still have a lot more to added to the enviroment. I hoping to give it a Blade Runner feel. Comments on lighting would be helpful too.

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[Phb]

wow... i think it's a great work..

just retouch some lighting, and finish more clearly the character... i think it's a powerfull begin..

[InitialT]

I have no idea which way the perspective is going on that image.

[Deckard]

Nice tone and details, I think the character is to bright, she's sitting where there should be shadows.
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[damppuppy]

I know this thread is really old. But I don't get time to work on anything til the holidays. So I'm here to bring it back from the dead. C&C is very much appreciated.


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[biochronox]

Jesus this is great! Seing this I don't really feel like being in a position to crit but IMO her right arm should be visible after it passes behind her leg? Also the tip of her right shoe should be a little bit lighter, matching the environment.

Great stuff, really. I wish I could do that

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[Simoom]

hmm, I liked it better before the background, now she's a junky, before she looked like some sort of prisoner, but that's just my preference For some reason I feel like her left arm should be darker... hmm, looks a little out of place. maybe that's just me.

[damppuppy]

Biochronox - Yeah, I haven't really gotten to her right arm just yet. But thanks about the tip on the shoe. I was wondering if anyone would notice.

Simoom - I agree that her pose in the other picture was stronger, cause she did look like a prisoner. But I originally intended to portray her as a junkie. But I do want to convey the sense that she is a prisoner, more of a prisoner of her addictions.

Thanks for the crits. I'm wondering if I should put in more to place her in the environment.
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[Nirox]

there was something really bothering me about her face
I think her chin is way to big alittle bit to "round"
try lowering her mouth...or making her chin smaller..

but its a great piece
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[Matthew]

nice

[Link_omega]

Never played Blade runner but I do feal the jist of what your going for.

Her right arm should be visible as was mentioned and also agree that right arm should be darker than her left arm.

Overall very nice
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