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Binke
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hoo! s' been a while.
here's a portrait of a girl (and future private model for me  ) whom has been inspiring me alot lately, and I decided to funk it up by making her look like an elf. All good practice since I need to improve on my human drawing skills.
and here's another painting of her in her bellydancing outfit, that i decided to give as a xmas gift, since it was completed on xmas anyway. It's a bit cheezy I know =)
I used one small 100x140, and one 160x120 picture for reference. |
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dr . bang
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| Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2002 8:27 am |
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Its been a while indeed!!!!! I looove potrait! These are wonderful! Your work are always colorful which i really love!
keep up the goodwork and post more!!!
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neff
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| Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2002 10:09 am |
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Looks great, good colors, but in the first pic the mouth seems wrong, hangs down on the one side
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Matthew
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| Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2002 10:29 am |
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Ragnarok
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| Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2002 12:17 pm |
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Binke, your works have always been great, and you keep improving
Love both pics and I think you'll get really good by doing this kind of exercises.
Keep them coming!
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Tinusch
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| Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2002 12:25 pm |
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| Awesome as usual, you definitely are improving. The only critique I have is that you need to lop off that streak on the side of her mouth, it looks a little askew like that. And I still love your warm orangey palette. Mmm. |
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Binke
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| Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2002 6:06 pm |
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hoo!
dr.bang: you just want a date with her you dirty little boy! hehe thanks dood!
Neff: you are probably correct, it looks a little scewed..ill fix that, since i've been thinking of coloring & printing it.
matthew: thanks!
Ragnarok: Glad to hear i'm improving, don't have so much time for painting personal stuff nowadays, but I try as often as I can. thanks!
Tinusch: eyy 'sup old old..forum..visiter! Yes yes! the mouth, must fix! Why thanks! hugs! |
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A.Buttle
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| Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2002 6:17 pm |
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<3.
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dr . bang
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Binke
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| Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2002 6:52 pm |
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abuttle: kthx4<3
bangbang: harrrr! here you goo, they are quite smal:
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dr . bang
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Simoom
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| Posted: Sun Dec 29, 2002 2:24 am |
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your belly dancer looks like she has a very long neck. I think its just her veil obscures her chin, but since you can't really see what's happening there, it looks like some sort of neckwrap. maybe its just me.
they both look great though, the colors on the dancer are purdy. |
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chip_artz
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| Posted: Sun Dec 29, 2002 4:53 am |
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| awesome work bro!!! |
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Gygaxis
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| Posted: Tue Dec 31, 2002 9:31 am |
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I love the colors in your dancer piece, the text seems a bit thrown in, and if it's not requird to be in, my call would be to lose it. The one thing I really notice is how stiff she looks. As a dancer, more so than a typical piece, I would expect a very dynamic posture from the body in this one, rather than a more or less straight standing (al biet at an angle) girl.
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