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Ricdee
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humm . nice draw ..
but i feel .. some loose of details ..
i dont know ...
so anyway . is very nice draw
maybe u have to put more details
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| Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 4:23 pm |
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| Looks good! But I think the face looks a lil flat or sumthin...it doesn't really look like it belongs to the hair, lol |
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| Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 4:32 pm |
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damned nice!
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| Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 4:58 pm |
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dunno about the details, looks fine to me!
I think it's a pure 4.5 out of 5 just 'cause some parts (including the face) really look kinda flattish. (flat:))
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| Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 5:48 pm |
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nice, I like it, interesting bike concept
I';m sorry dont want to be nitpicking really but it's the only thing that come to my mind right now: the tyres should probably flatten a lil bit on the floor with the weight of the bike..
cheers
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| Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 7:54 pm |
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Greetings Ricdee,
I agree with fab on adding some weight to the floor under the bike but also somthing that jumped out at me right away I'm suprised no one mentioned... I think her nose is pointed the wrong way. If you do that same pose looking in a mirror you'll see that your nose wont cross over to the other side of your face. then again it might just be how you did the lighting.
I like how you included your rough sketch. I really like your flow. This might sound a little silly but I also like how you didn't put rims on the wheels of the bike. Nice touch. Great work Ricdee.
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| Posted: Fri Dec 20, 2002 10:26 am |
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| cool, but I like the drawing better! |
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