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Matthew · Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 9:38 am

Hello, I used to be in a band.
That is some hardrocking dude. Smile

Merry Christmas
Matthew

Basement bound · Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 10:24 am

I belive you mean that you want a critique. I want to jump to the coloured version. I sorry if this sounds mean but the only thing that is good about it is the mist the rest covers up the pencils and doesn't do it any justice. As for the line drawing I am not sure but the guitar look funky kind of out of perspective. The lines for the material at too fluidic and they really don't say cloak to me. Plus it doesn't look as though it is drapped over a human. The base of the guitar looks great as well as his left hand (could be beefed up though). The other hand looks unnatural and I don't think fingers behave like that.
good luck
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Ryknow · Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 11:53 am

I like the concept alot. a couple of things though bug me. I play guitar so the neck and headstock are really what threw the pic off for me. Look at a guitar there are about half the number of frets that you have drawn. The strap is only on one side of the guitar its not at the butt of it so how can it be draped over him like that? anyhow kickass idea but like was previously stated try coloring again it ruined your original concept imho.
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kosta55555 · junior member Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2002 Posts: 43

there are exactly 24 frets in my electric guitar may be you are talking about clasic guitar... anyway im playing 2 and everything is fine with the gutar

Ryknow · Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 12:29 pm

sorry after counting your right but it looks initally like there are way more maybe a perspective error. but the ass end of the guitar would still show a strap if i am not mistaken. Also the hood looks to be seperated from the cloak. maybe thats what you were going for though. any ways gl with it
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Dekard · member Member # Joined: 01 Nov 2001 Posts: 274

Also at the angle you have him you would definitely see his face. Unless you tilt his head down a bit..

kosta55555 · junior member Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2002 Posts: 43

his fase is so dark that u cant see it he is very mad

Soak · Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 3:32 pm

strange warlock design Very Happy

Max · Posted: Fri Dec 20, 2002 10:22 am

the drawing rox