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Arc][Pello
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Just back from my first term at uni and couldnt wait to get started on more digital work:)
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haohmaru
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 1:56 pm |
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wow! now this is really impressive.
i can't give you any critques, since i just love your picture the way it is. beautiful. almost haunting...
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 3:06 pm |
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Damn, that's one mean ... err Angel?
You ain't letting us down that's for sure.
Only thing I could crit with my retarded eyes is perhaps that the nose is a bit flat in the middle, but that could be a result of my retarded eyes.
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Arc][Pello
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 3:33 pm |
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It probably is wrong....ive not really drawn many noses:) need to learn:)
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 4:05 pm |
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| are those leaves for feathers growing from her, er, wings? Looks pretty good, there doesn't seem to be any shadow from her hair which might be nice. |
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 4:19 pm |
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A really nice pic, ya just can't be on da ugly side with all those blue color tones if you know wut I'm talkin' 'bout.
Dude, been messing around with that pic of yours... watcha think?
original:
manipulation:
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Arc][Pello
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 4:30 pm |
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With white hair you dont get shadows on the face if it is illuminated by bright lights...or so ive noticed
Flat i cant see your manip:(
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 4:35 pm |
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| I literally said "WOAHohohoh" |
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antx
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 5:23 pm |
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Arc][Pello: load both in PS, copy one into the other as a new layer and then turn the new layer on and off. That will show the difference.
According to me it looks indeed slightly better... |
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Arc][Pello
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 5:40 pm |
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Ill try to mend it soon:) after working on a single piece for a while you become blind to these sort of mistakes.
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 6:31 pm |
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It's subtle but I think Flat's straightened the face a little bit, in fact the figure does look to tilt a bit on the right side, and also a bit off center. Now with my meager knowledge and after looking in Loomis creative illustration I 'd say this one uses a symetrical composition like stained-glass in churches and other religious pictures., so she need to be nicely centered. Also on the left side her hand suggests the picture frame, but on the right side the arm seems to move out of the picture and unbalances a bit the image. Very nice though.
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Arc][Pello
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 6:43 pm |
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I didnt want to make it symetrical...dont like things to look too precise, the body deliberatly twists round to one side just to add a nice subtle curve to the piece. imperfection is the key to perfection or so the saying goes...i think:)
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 11:58 pm |
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I really like it. Good lighting, shapes, pose...
The face seems to need a little more work, but it's a matter of practice.
I really like the way the hands look, good job! 
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| Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 4:16 am |
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wow .. this are wonder .. i look it on DA and man .. this great
i add it in my favorites ..
i love
just ...
u have some WIP , or tutorial about some work you made ?
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| Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 6:16 am |
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Fantastic!!!!
You never disappoint me.
Just wonderful  |
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Arc][Pello
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| Posted: Fri Dec 20, 2002 5:53 pm |
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Thanx guys for all the good C&C
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| Posted: Sat Dec 21, 2002 9:22 am |
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nice textures
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| Posted: Mon Dec 23, 2002 9:31 am |
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superb, love the colours, textures, atmosphere
and that samurai is great too, should show it off
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| Posted: Tue Dec 24, 2002 3:12 am |
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Ok, this is pretty good, but for the sake of being a real prick, fuck you.
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