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[666]Flat
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 Posted: Tue Dec 17, 2002 2:32 pm |
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ok this comic is far from finished (obviously), I just wanted to get some input about what you think about it "as it is". Text and pics are gonna be overworked, so if you have any suggestions - lemme hear 'em.
It's gonna be a short one and I don't even know myself how it could go on. All I know is my person is gonna be part of that thing, maybe I'll be king Triton... Like said b4, suggestions are welcum.
The problem about the whole deal is - I just started drawing without any plot or concept which sorta shows -- so if you can fix me out with yuor supercreativity, PLZ DO IT!
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| Posted: Tue Dec 17, 2002 2:51 pm |
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 i like it as a start...
hope you don't mind me pointing this out, but instead of "So what", it would sound more natural if she said "Well?.." Also, in the first panel, her anatomy could do with some work.
OK that's it, keep it coming Flat |
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[666]Flat
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| Posted: Tue Dec 17, 2002 3:10 pm |
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keep it cuming 2, guys... ok so what exactly would you change anatomical wise, gez?
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| Posted: Tue Dec 17, 2002 3:25 pm |
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ok pick up that copy of playboy i know you have lying on the floor  and check out a midriff. you should find a faint line between her abs, going through her navel, and that the curve of her back isn't quite so angular. also, her breasts should be less spherical (although playboy won't help you out in this case). Lastly, change the Benz to a VW...  |
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| Posted: Tue Dec 17, 2002 7:06 pm |
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wow. amazing. you actually draw like you write...
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[666]Flat
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 12:02 am |
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| haohmaru wrote: |
| wow. amazing. you actually draw like you write... |
Wow. You're actually bitchin' like the shitfucking smartass you are. Dude, if you don't have a fucking clue just stfu.
Gez, that exaggerated ("angular") back thingie was quite intentional but you're right, it didn't work too well.
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 2:06 am |
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| haohmaru wrote: |
| wow. amazing. you actually draw like you write... |
hahaha
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[666]Flat
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 6:23 am |
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OK, freaks -- I'm freezing that whole thing for now. I'm not posting that WIP to read some bullshit of dicksucking envy ridden fucks. Yeah, rock on, haohmaru, all I've seen from you was utter crap! You know how ta shake it.
@ Gez : Thanks.
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| Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 9:08 am |
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*shrug*
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| Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2002 10:21 am |
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| wow. amazing. you actually draw like you write... |
Bwahahaha!
I bet he smells like he writes too! |
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