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Totally member
Member # Joined: 17 Jun 2000 Posts: 280 Location: Laguna Niguel, Ca
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Simoom member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2002 Posts: 302 Location: nc, usa
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Posted: Sun Dec 15, 2002 8:08 am |
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I like all of them, expect the GIJoe one, it doesn't look nearly as well down as the others. hmm, its too incomplete looking with its fuzzy strokes. think it needs to be worked on a bit longer. |
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Ragnarok member
Member # Joined: 12 Nov 2000 Posts: 1085 Location: Navarra, Spain
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Posted: Sun Dec 15, 2002 12:44 pm |
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You know, since the times when we both posted at fgfx forums, you've improved a lot. Your work looks great right now, and I hope you post more in a semi regular basis because it's good to see works of this level.
Keep working! _________________ "Ever forward, my darling wind." -Master Yuppa
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Matthew member
Member # Joined: 05 Oct 2002 Posts: 3784 Location: I am out of here for good
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Posted: Sun Dec 15, 2002 1:23 pm |
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The lighting in the first one is a killer, totally awesome.
Keep it up
Matthew |
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Yaseck junior member
Member # Joined: 15 Dec 2002 Posts: 21 Location: Poland
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Posted: Sun Dec 15, 2002 1:52 pm |
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I see in U`re works an academic-technic. I`m FinalArt student and I see the academic quality. U`re very good - I must admit, but there is no "YOU" in it. But it`s only my opnion. _________________ ..:: Yaseck ::.. |
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Max member
Member # Joined: 12 Aug 2002 Posts: 3210 Location: MIND
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Posted: Mon Dec 16, 2002 7:22 am |
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The last one of the Portrait Drawings is great - is that you? |
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klaivu member
Member # Joined: 29 Jan 2000 Posts: 551 Location: Helsinki, Finland
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Posted: Mon Dec 16, 2002 8:18 am |
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wow. I see a lot of progress
On the g.i joe one : the logo is pretty good, and the font selections are okay, but the illustration and the layout are both somewhat weak, especially the cover. Black bg doesn't suit the clean colors of the logo at all - try a white background. Really, if you're not all bored with the thing, redo the cover, go for something more dramatic and dynamically laid out, clean preferably. The other stuff shows you could do far better. |
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Totally member
Member # Joined: 17 Jun 2000 Posts: 280 Location: Laguna Niguel, Ca
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