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Matthew
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Hi there.
Thought I would post something.
Let me know what you think, always C&C.
Matthew
Future Warrior
Old Warrior
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Drunken Monkey
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| Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2002 7:08 am |
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I like your old warrior much better. Mainly because he looks like a warrior. The first guy looks like Ricky Martin with mustache, dancing to 'La Vida Loca'.
If i was you right now, i would concentrate on anatomy more than anything. |
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Eric Pommer
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| Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2002 9:55 am |
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The anatomy on your second one is much better. The first is in a highly awkward pose, with an arm that couldn't possibly bend that way. I would suggest you try drawing figures using something as a reference...I find athletic magazines have lots of good reference figures.
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| Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2002 1:59 pm |
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| Dammit, theres that ridiculous pose again. Stop it! |
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Matthew
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| Posted: Wed Dec 11, 2002 2:54 am |
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Hello. I�m gonna try to answer more personally this time like all the other cool dudes does.
"Dr Monkey"
Thank you, He actually looks a little bit like Ricky...hehe.
I know about the anatomy, have a little problem with those muscles.
"Eric Pommer"
I think the arm could be twisted that way...hmmm
The second was made yesterday so I guess I am learning.
Thanks for the tip about the athletic magazine. Thanks for the reply.
"Loxley"
It seems like I am using that pose quite often, even on the Mechas..hehe
But I think the dancing pose suited this guy anyway. Thank you for comments.
have a nice day everyone
Matthew |
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Max
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| Posted: Wed Dec 11, 2002 12:29 pm |
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Hey Matthew, I like the second one better. Very good job on the clothes, hands and anatomy.
The first one has some mistakes like too big hands and a strange pose, the anatomy isn't that bad.
Keep drawing and painting  |
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Matthew
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| Posted: Wed Dec 11, 2002 1:41 pm |
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cool, thank you Max  that means a lot to hear from a pro.
hehe...one more for me but it looks like it is gonna be a problem to reach your post amount...hehe
have a nice day
Matthew |
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Max
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| Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 7:20 am |
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Matthew: I am not a pro - seriously. Anyway, thanks for the kind words
Problem, z z z - just keep posting and drawing.
I am sure you will reach my amount sometime. |
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Matthew
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| Posted: Thu Dec 12, 2002 7:37 am |
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| hehe cool Max |
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| Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2002 9:43 am |
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| at the rate your going you'll have more posts then a lot of people. Really soon. |
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| Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2002 9:59 am |
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| spam demon Matty |
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Matthew
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| Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2002 11:01 am |
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hehe, cool there dudes...hehe
have a nice weekend
Matthew |
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| Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2002 8:51 pm |
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heh, the dude in red looks like my boss
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| Posted: Fri Dec 13, 2002 9:36 pm |
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sorry for asking... but is future warrior holding a giant Q-tip?
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Matthew
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| Posted: Sun Dec 15, 2002 7:45 am |
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I guess it looks like the future warrior is holding a giant q-tip...hehe If you mean a q-tip with a usage for cleaning the ears...hehe
hehe thanks for your replies
Matthew |
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| Posted: Sun Dec 15, 2002 8:58 am |
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Heh. Cool drawings. Hey, we all gotta start out somewhere at some level. =)
People have mentioned problems with the anatomy, but I'm not sure if anyone's brought up problems with proportion.
I recommend that you go to a local bookstore and see if they have anatomy books by either Burne Hogarth or George Bridgeman. They helped me a lot when I began figure drawing a few terms back junior year in high school. This may sound foul, but I found that staring at those books and reading the actual text when I was on bathroom breaks really helped (being the busy person I am). Okay, maybe I shoulda omitted the last part (no offense to anyone), but hey, that's my ten cents. =)
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Matthew
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| Posted: Sun Dec 15, 2002 11:27 am |
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No offense taken, I think the tips here in Sijun Forum really helps.
So thank you for the tips with the books.
Matthew |
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