[haohmaru]

i am registered here for quite a while now, but this is more or less the first image i am posting, and i hope you can provide me with a little help.

as you can clearly see i am having some anatomy problems with the girl in the picture. mainly concerning her shoulder. some areas are still unfinished, like her stomach and hair.
any kind of comments and critiques highly appreciated.
thank you.


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[ejwize]

my solution for a circumstance like this would be to get out my digital camera and take some shots of my wife in the pose to use as reference.

[faB]

sheseems alright i guess something a little difficult to read is that we seen the upper arm on the front and the forearm on the back, but both appear as the upper arm more or less, maybe if you add the hand of her right armon the knee, something lkike that to make the arms read a little better?

PS: or you might want to have both forearms crossing under the leg
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[gezstar]

the shoulders are too far apart as far as i can tell. i think her right arm should be parallel to the other one, and it might clarify things to have a forearm visible somewhere.

i like your pic though.

[haohmaru]

thanks for the help so far. i'm going to try out your suggestions.
i'll keep this thread updated with the newest versions.
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[echox]

Part of your problem is the color, I think. She needs some reflection from the grass on her hindquarters. She dosen't look like she exists in the space.

Its amazing what a little color can do. Try it?

echo

[SikeSpiegal005]

hehe...It kinda reminds me of a gamecube commercial.

[dARCKLOWN]

She looks like am amputee
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[Eric Drobile]

I can't really help you, because that right there is better than anything I could ever do.

When this is finished, it's going to be so beautiful.
I LOVE IT!
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