[zak]

just practising to improve my bg painting skills. the first in a whole series of related bg's. hopefull i manage to usem in an animation sometime.

[Dan]

There's some perspective issues with the poles. Everything else about it suggests a sort of looking down view, but the poles are drawn from right on. I have a feeling that this has mostly to do with the lighting on the top of the pole and coudl be easily fixed. Perhaps add a third vanishing point below the ground. Sort of tilt the poles and the walls so that they are bigger at the top and smaller near the base of the picture
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[zak]

oh, the whole thing is supposed to be like a platform, and the bit with the poles raised about 3 meters. its not straight with the ground where the benches are on

[gezstar]

regardless of how high the platform is, the poles look a bit off. i like the anime feel of this picture, so if you fixed the perspective, it'd be much better.

[sf09]

The poles look too straight. Try making the end of the pole touchin the platform go up-and-a-bit-left for the right pole and vice versa for the left pole. Or you can make them down-left/right, depending on height of pole.