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 Posted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:42 pm |
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Hmm... Where to start hmm...
how about with
scan01_to.jpg: looks good
scan01_c.jpg:
Hmm the hand and gun still seem to be out of place it needs to be refined a little give definition to the finger and slowly touch the gun up some more.
It appears that barrel is going from the far end of the head to the tip of nose. From the angel it is posed at the tip should be in comparison to
the barrel smaller than what it is.
scan01_d.jpg:
It looks at first you compensated for the size of the barrel and distance but
it still has the same problem. Also the fingers are better refined than c but
is slightly not in the correct positions.
The thumb should be angeled upwards and to the left and is usually closer to the gun also the palm of the hand usually is also present on such small
firearms.
His ear appears to be slighty to small. Other than that it looks great. Keep
trying and you'll get it the way you want it. 
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| Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2002 7:14 am |
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Seems like you go on a comment-rampage now and then, and all I can see is your name in the Last Post column, hehe 
I'm not sure that the ear is too small, maybe too thin, or too far back... which gives an illusion of it being too small... i'll try and fix it however...
did you also notice i've given him six fingers?
i'll fix that, and the thumb, and hopefully the weird position of the hand... |
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| Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2002 3:34 pm |
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Actually I didn't catch the sixth finger 
and yes I do dont I 
 Usually when I get on I tend hunt anything that appears in need
of C&C and respond to my hearts delight thats why tag the line at the end.
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| Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 1:40 pm |
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looks good but in the coloured one i would redefine the sky.Dunno looks too much automatic filter for me.
As is see they are finished? Post them into Finished work next time plz
soak ._.. |
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| Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 3:07 pm |
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I really like your kinky style and technique! It's a kind of a 'more straight' look upon the view of the world..
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| Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 7:46 pm |
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i thought this thread would've died out by now...
soak - they're not finished, and as of now, i don't intend on finishing 'em...
i do have a 'finished' version of the b/w on my site.. anyway...
desmozgenes - uh, my what...? err 
some crap i did last night... had no intention on posting it here though
i see several mistakes myself, i wont 'fix it' though... off to the next...life goes on... etc etc... comments are welcome though.
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| Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 8:20 pm |
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| oh, and i post this here because i dont think it's worth a new thread in the finished forum, i dont expect that many replies anyway... |
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| Posted: Wed Dec 04, 2002 10:53 pm |
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If you're looking for critiques, you'll probably find you get more feedback (that's more helpful) if you ask very specific questions about specific pieces. I.E. "On the villain guy I'm having trouble with the anatomy in the left shoulder. Any suggestions?" If you really need general feedback maybe ask something like:" in these images what do you think is my weakest point, what do I really need to work on?" That is if you are looking for C&C, maybe you're not. Just a suggestion.
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| Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 12:24 am |
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inspector lee, sometimes it takes a fresh eye to spot severe problems that you may not see yourself... and in those cases, it's rather hard to ask for help on specific issues. if i don't ask for critique, a general comment, like about your feelings or whatever else is welcome...
now, i dont think i have to specifically state what i want, it's quite clear what the purpose is in most cases.
"read between the lines..."
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