[mario36]

Hey guys. I tried some new things with this one texture wise so it took me a bit longer to finish up. I know that there are tons or errors...but I'll let you point them out to me just so I know if they're extremely noticable. Lemme know whatcha think. Thanks!

If you'd like to see the back story for Cyborgtica, go to www.animatedbuzz.com/Cyborgtica

-mario
www.animatedbuzz.com

[Matthew]

It is cool as ever and the color mood in the first pic really rocks.
I guess there will be a big fight in the next issue #5.

keep it up
Matthew

P.S. Looking forward to next episode.

[Awetopsy]

only crit: the bottom left panel, the speech bubble seems to be coming from the guy in front, not the shadowy figure in the rear... It took me some time to figure out it was him.

I personally would have brought the figure forward and not put him waaaaaay back there.

the camera angle should be a little higher and the shadow figure should be brought way forward so you dont have as much empty space.

[Tinusch]

Very nice. As was previously mentioned, that speech bubble does look like it's coming from the bald guy, which kind of threw me off when I saw his statement completed by the black-haired guy. Aside from that, the only problems I see are with spelling - stabilize and mobilize are the correct spellings. But it's looking great overall.

[mario36]

ok, wow. I really feel dumb now! lol. Spelling words wrong?..jeez...

Anyhow, I've edited the text and tweaked a few things graphic wise. Hope they make it look better. Thanks for all the help, guys.

-mario
aniamtedbuzz.com