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spyders
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 6:23 pm     Reply with quote
Kristin Kreuk

took a few hours, used a reference, but I got real problems with makin people look like who they're supposed to be, so it doesn't look like her

here's a small version of the reference i used:
http://www.kryptonsite.com/castpageskristin.GIF

crits are welcome, as are tutorials (found kismet's already)
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 9:24 pm     Reply with quote
not too bad! the blending is good, i think its just a little blurry and muddy in the nose area...also, a highlight in the eye will help too...give those a try
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 3:13 am     Reply with quote
I see you are fan of Smallville, that series Rocks Smile Smile
The picture is really good I think, maybe you could highlight the middle
section in her hair a little bit more?

take it easy
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 5:19 am     Reply with quote
heh she comes to the theater i work at pretty frequently..maybe twice..or trice a month
heh
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 4:34 pm     Reply with quote
Hey spyders sup man i see youve joined
ya i really like it especially for your first try to get such realism Shocked
and as a plus someone i know now posts at these forums
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 6:21 pm     Reply with quote
it's very good actually. just 2 minor things -
1) dont cut the painting like that, at the chin. add some more neck and desolve it somehow if u like. dont let the natural line of the chin end the pic likr this...

2)maybe u can add some light, flash, blink to her eyes (to the "cornia" [was that spelled right?])so they will look a lil more alive.

but the hair is awsome and so is the skin tones. liked
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 26, 2002 6:37 pm     Reply with quote
thanks for all the replies =)

zippzopp -- ya, nose gave me some trouble, as it usually does in my comic style, sigh -- and I think i followed the reference too much, and only have one tiny highlight, so i'll add a bigger one

matthew -- smallville's a cool show indeed, probably my favorite non-animated one, and i'll go add some highlights to the hair

uliq -- Very Happy neat

curtis -- sup man, thanks for your comment ^^ tho i'm still mad it doesn't look like her =(

topeira --
1) thanks for the tip, some neck sounds like a good idea
2)cornia eh? i'll look in the dictionary where that is and add some light to it ^^

won't be workin on it tonight...[sigh] gotta go finish an 8-page art history paper >.< Sad
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