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Link_omega
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 Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 9:02 am |
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As my title implies I am getting back into the habit drawing again. This for those that wish to give word to my critique and in return critique me while at it.
To made short and simple. If you see my critique in another topic or thread you can come and reply with as much words of power imagery and the such as you like.
Also while your here you can give your honest opinions, critiques, thoughts, etc about my personal work as you like.
I should have my website updated by next week so as to reflect my anime "YellowStar" that I'm going to try to make. Further information will be provided there on Celenity's background and so forth.
Topic one: Celenity:
I think I should touchup on her tail and probably redraw her legs a little.
[url=http://www.angelfire.com/anime2/yellowstar/images/img.html]
Image is here[/url]
There all fixed annoying Angelfire and its img sharing block...
The link should be fixed.
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Godwin
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| Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 9:23 am |
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ok nice drawing, but is it just me or does your colouring look like it was done in MSpaint?
the legs seem too short and fat(at the ankles?) to me, and the right arm looks rather awkward
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Link_omega
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| Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 10:03 am |
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Your correct in both cases.
I did her in IBM Microsoft Paint and converted her into a gif in Macintosh PhotoShop 
once I have some time I'll add the second updated version later for viewing.
Thankyou for your time. Keep the critiques coming. Nothing anyone say can offend me. So feel free to leave your honest opinions as well. |
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Inspector Lee
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| Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 10:03 am |
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I don't know what anyone else is seeing but all I see is a box with "Image hosted by Angelfire" in it. Can't click on it or anything?? Is it just me?
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Yanka
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| Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 10:05 am |
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Same here - where did the pic go..?  |
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Inspector Lee
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| Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 10:42 am |
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Ahhh, now I can See it. What application are you using to create this image? It looks like 16 bit colors or something.
-my bad, just refreshed the page and saw the answer.
nevermind 
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Link_omega
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| Posted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 1:16 pm |
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Beware a little nudity not much.
For those of you out their here is an update to Celenity with the help PhotoShop tools.
The First one is to help with proportioning clothing on future models of her.
Here to see both updates.
Thankyou for your time.
Exscuse me... for misconceptions or for any offenses but you have been warned. |
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