[ke_kit]

Are the colors and the anatomy good? I really want to finish this one in the right way and your C&C would be great...


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[Ragnarok]

I think it has a lot of potential.
The drawing looks neat. The body is perfect, and I also like the left arm and hand.
In my opinion the right arm seems to be too backwards, in a unnatural way. If it isn't "paralel" to the body, then it should have a slightly different angle and be shorter, I think.

Good one
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[ejwize]

Hey Ke_kit.

Looking at the thumbnail, I thought the right arm, the trailing arm looked a bit awkward... mostly in how the hand meets the arm.

Then when I blew it up, my attention turned to the really nice details and local anatomy/line art stuff which is excellent and drew my attention away from what at first struck me as awkward.

Looking closely at it and going back and forth between the big and little versions, I think you might be able to make the flow of the arms and hands a bit more natural. It seems like you are working for a kind of flowing, lyrical look, which comes across very nicely in the hands by themselves, but which I think gets jammed up a bit where the hands and wrists meet.

My suggestion would be to add some canvas to the right and work on putting shoulders, (even though you can't see them since you're looking at them longwise) arms and hands in together as one big flowing unit.

Maybe imagine what a line would look like in 3D if you traced it from the left hand up the arm across the shoulders, down the right arm to the right hand. And then turn that line around in space and see if it flows. (For example I don't think that line would look right if you were looking at the figure as it is now from above)

If you nailed a really nice flowing gesture and then cemented it in with that sweet detailed linework of yours, I think this piece would really sing.