[pulpy ze brachypelman]

this is just a page of my comic book. crits are welcome
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[Max]

I don't have any crits....
I like it very much and I would like to see the texts.

[Link_omega]

"Top Right slide" :Hair usually extends from the nape of the neck "Back lower portion". Her Head is slightly to small especially her skull cap. If you make her hair currently a little larger it will cover for this and make her head appear a bit more full. Her left ear needs a slight adjusting "move it a hair up" eyebrows appears to express that she is contiplating something and she also has very large lips reduce its size by a quarter to make her look a bit more cute.
"Top Middle Far Left slide" : Same thing about his hair other than that nice expresion.
"Top Middle Top slide" : Her head still slightly too small. Hmm the guys hair is slightly short.
"Top Middle Bottom slide" : Hmm once again. Also anger expression need a little touching.
"Bottom Far Left" : Finally this one is just right proportions are just about correct. He's a bit bald above right eye...
"Last two Slides" : A few heads new adjusting the one female in the bottom is just about it.

I dont mean to affend anyone but this is just my honest opinion on critiquing this picture slide for your comic. ThankYou for your time.

[pulpy ze brachypelman]

Max>i'll put it with the text on my site soon
Link_Omega>thank you for your crits, and no problem, you don't...hum...i don't know "affend"... so no problem...hahahahahahaha