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jasonN
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 1:46 am     Reply with quote
Well here it is. I'm semi pleased with it. I need to work on drawing muscles better. But I'm pretty tired of it and I'm ready to move on to my next drawing. I tried to take into consideration all the crits from my WIP thread. Thanks for the help guys. Any crit or comment is welcome.


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 3:04 am     Reply with quote
wow cool work .. I realy like his face and the lights .
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Matthew
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 4:11 am     Reply with quote
Oh my God what a detail! Great
I gave comments on this one in the work in progress section, I�m glad that you didn�t listen to me....hehe.
I think that muscles is really difficult to paint also what muscle to keep in front and so on....
great job.

take it easy
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william willette
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 5:05 am     Reply with quote
I know this should be in topic post but...

All iv usta drawn in school is muscles and guns, the only reason y i started drawing thos pictures is because of how cool thoughs guys at Image draw.

Now 2 years into highschool a few usta be friends are calling me syco.
Have you had this problem? Its not like alls i do is draw, I play guitar and draw Razz Its just accedent by influence how my drawings look so scary.
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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 19, 2002 2:07 pm     Reply with quote
Id be screaming too if my crotch was being electricuted.. Wink

cool image.
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Randis Albion
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 8:14 am     Reply with quote
very very good work, great color!
lol, well i know he is about to do a shoryuken.. but it could be masturbating as well.... looks like one hand is shaking the lightning cum...
lol, just joking man! Think i will do some SF pics as well, long time since i did that.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 1:42 pm     Reply with quote
well now, the first thing i noticed is that, if someone has a light source directly inside their palm, then the outside of their hand should be in shadow.

so i think this would be improved if you would shadow out his right hand and forearm a bit.
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gArGOyLe^
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 2:12 pm     Reply with quote
Well.. if the light source on the out side is bright enough then the outside of hands will be illuminated too..

heres an example.. its also a painting.. not real life but.. bleah.. hehe




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well now, the first thing i noticed is that, if someone has a light source directly inside their palm, then the outside of their hand should be in shadow.

so i think this would be improved if you would shadow out his right hand and forearm a bit.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 22, 2002 10:07 pm     Reply with quote
your counterexample is even worse.

it looks like that guy's left arm is, itself, illuminated. which is just all wrong. technically.

and if you're talking about light passing through the skin, then his hand should be a mix of bright red and yellow, like after using the dodge and burn tools a couple times. but he does not do that in his.
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