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Dr. Bang · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 7:18 am

HI! This is just a small study from a cool photo i found it a magazine. It turned out to take me a long time, i didnt finish with all those details so i gave up.

i hope u like, C&C are welcome.

http://home.wanadoo.nl/emviet/ref.jpg
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Matthew · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 7:45 am

Hey, I like the mood in this one. I don�t think it need more detail.
Beautiful.

take it easy
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Awetopsy · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 8:11 am

Well done Dr.

I really like it.

Binke · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 9:45 am

I think it looks quite excellent mr Bang

Thyrfing · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 9:58 am

Great work Dr.Bang, couldn't have done it better Very Happy

I dont think it needs more details, it is great!

Thyrfing.

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Max · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 11:28 am

God job !!!!!

She wears converse!

I like this picture most of all I have seen so far from you.

SikeSpiegal005 · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 11:34 am

The proportion of her hair to her head is all wrong, and your basic composition leaves alot to desire....

lol! j/k! its great! And it really doesnt need more detail...i mean, u could add more...but i think that might ruin the mood. well, not ruin it, but u know what i mean. I think its perfect the way it is.

tek9z · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 1:44 pm

O_O' whoa! haven't seen stuff from u a while so this is
a real pleasant surprise . excellent stuff bang Smile

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henrik · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 1:47 pm

Great work Doc. Her forehead is a bit too straight and high tho.
(Btw, maybe make some of them thingies around her neck shine a little?)
Me likes. Keep it up.
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jasonN · Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 2:55 pm

Mmmm I really like the way you did the top and the way you handled the shadow under her head. Overall it's a great pic, I love how she's sitting in a space, it gives the image a great finish. Very Happy

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Dr. Bang · Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 6:27 am

Matthew: it doesnt? haha, i'm glad to hear that thanks!

Awetopsy: WELL WELL WELL! CONGRATULATION ON YOUR FIRST REPLY TO MY THREAD AFTER 3 YEARS. Thanks though Very Happy

(i don't blame ya Laughing

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Binke: Binke! Its you! You've been missing in action for a while now, and its nice to see you come back, JUST TO REPLY MY POST (i hope so)

Thyrfing: Thanks so much Thryfing! Its nice to hear my lazyness get the credits Very Happy

Max Kulich: YOU NOTICED! Mission accomplished. It looks better than my most other pieces cause i actually used reference for a change. Anyways, THANKS Smile

SikeSpiegal005: IM YOUR LONG LOST FATHER. jk, "I think its perfect the way it is." Awww would you marry me

tek9z: Finally! You liked my picture for ONCE hehehehehehhe. Its great to hear from you agin, i've always enjoy your oekaki art too! U live in Europe right? Come visit me some day and we'll make sweet love.

henrik: ITS HENRIK! I am soooooooo agree with you about the forehead part, i need to draw from life more and stop looking at exagerate instructional references. YEAH, THE JEWELS SHOULD SHINE< THAT IS A NICE TOUCH WHY DIDNT I TIHNK OF THIS B4. "Keep it up." I really hope you mean keep it up your butt cuz i like it that way.

JasonN: AzN PrYde!!!!!!!! Me too! Thakns! I'm suprised that many ppl like those shadow, i thought i did something bad with it, i was wrong them. Thanks so much JasonN, and keep postin yer art plz i love it.
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merlyns · Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 7:07 am

nice piece I like the feeling but something bothers me about the face I can't explain it really.

btw are you learning the dutch langue all ready?

-david
p.s which part of den haag do you live. I often shop in den haag they have such nice shops there.
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Awetopsy · Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 10:21 am

have I seriously not replied to any of your threads in the whole time Ive been here?

sorry.

i do really like your art.... guess I never got around to saying it. Smile

Malachi Maloney · Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 10:27 am

Nice skin tones Dr. Smile

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-HoodZ- · Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 2:26 pm

Drunken Monkey · Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 2:46 pm

Her legs seem too short and thin. But other than that you are getting pretty good Mr Bang.

Intuos · member Member # Joined: 29 Oct 2000 Posts: 182

Holy fluffy kittens! This is a HUGE jump from your a lot of your previous work (especially of females)! Well done, ol' chap.

I'm feeling that her left (our right) leg has a curve on the thigh upward that doesn't seem natural to me. It's throwing the realism off for me, actually.

Great values, especially the skintones. It's awesome to see you getting such a handle on them.

I'd like to see a bit more texture in her clothing in general. Right now, it all seems kinda the same. Maybe a bit more variation in her jeans?

Everything I am mentioning here is all very minor. The image as a whole is stunning, Bang. Seriously great job. Looks like Holland is having a wonderful impact on your artistic career! Smile

iByrn · Posted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 11:43 pm

I must say, Bang, you've improved quite a bit since the last time I saw your art. Good work! I think the folds in her jeans could be more sharply defined.
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[666]Flat · Posted: Sun Nov 10, 2002 2:49 am

This piece o candy ge+s my sIgn 0F appRov4l, d0c

(And y3z, I would do her)
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NeoFun · Posted: Sun Nov 10, 2002 4:02 pm

Amazing stuff, but her legs and feet are too small. Also, I think her pants could use a bit darker shadows. They seem a bit too soft and muted.
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Dr. Bang · Posted: Mon Nov 11, 2002 7:28 am

Omg more replies coming, i've must done something right this time! Any more replies and i'm gonna run off like a shy little asian school girl!

Merlyns: Thanks, Yes, its because her forehead its quite flat, i'll make it rounder soon. I'm learning dutch right now, but very slowly, i dont think i'm gonna make it noooooooooo.
I live near the Central Station, like 6 block aways i think.

Awetopsy: YES YOU DO I"VE BEEN COUNTING hehe. Np! Thanks for enjoying it, i really dont mind IF you never replied to mine cuz i suck hehe.

Malachi: How are you doing mang, long time no see. Thanks!

dr.: I love your name Very Happy

Dank u wel!

hoodz: i gave up on all those details and such, youre right now, even if i spend a few more hours on this it still look the same Smile

dr. monkey: ANOTHER DR.! You're right about the leg hehehehe, its funny how no one have noticed it yet. I'll make it bigger some time. Thanks alot dr. monkey!

intuos: Thanks so much for noticing my progression sir! I think this piece is better cuz i used ref.......and its an easy perspective to do Sad

Yeah, you're the 2nd person that notice about the secret flaw in this picture hehehhe. Thanks again for the comment. Holland sure does have an impact on my career, thanks to the whore!

IByrn: I should have define it much more, and her shirts also, but spending on this picture for a long time bored me so much. I'll come back and fix the whole thing. Thanks so much for the comment and critique.

Flat: I WiLl DeStroY you In CoUnter StrIKE..........THREE TIMES!!! I would do her too! hehehehhehehe

Neofun: 3rd person noticed the leg hehehehehe, thanks, i'll fix her forehead.....legs......and few other flaws that picture have and it should be 50% finish! Surprised

I love you all in the most homo erotic way
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