[Max]

Good job !!!!

I just would add more texture.
But that's just my opinion.

very well done....

[neff]

Oh my God, this is one of the coolest things i've ever seen

[r3t]

*wow*
very original character
i wish i could come up with stuff like this.
I would give it a bit more texture and detail. If that's not what you are looking for just clean it up a bit more.
But even without doing any or this it's an awesome pic!!

[Vyle]

Awesome!!!

[Egg Beater]

AWwwwwww yea, that rules

[Light]

Looks good but for a character design.. I don't know. I think you should simplify it. Also, I think you need to watch the black splotches on the form. I don't really like that and try to be consistent with shading method (i.e saturated tones on arm but not face).

I like this a lot but I think maybe a bit cleaner...

[pigbelly]

Hi!
Done some changes to a character design of min
The illustratione is about 80% done.

Tell me what you think, and if, what I should change!!

Cheers
/tommie

[ October 25, 2002: Message edited by: pigbelly ]

[Shazaam]

Excellent work!!

[agent44]

hey now, that's cool. It looks fine to me...maybe less background, but other than that, great!

[Molako_Plus]

hes got some strong legs for that ankle cannon.

[criztu]

it has potential. but, his hair will easily get caught in that shoulder gun, expression on his face is too soft, looks like he was called to arms when he was just reading a book, and he's unhappy with that. the knees are too thin, the overall impression is you started to draw a vicious robot, but at half-the-way couldn't figure a way to make it original, so you changed your mind and made it human, probably you should exercise more on both warrior profiles and robots. i don't want to say i know how to do these things allready, this is just my opinion

[khan]

Looks great! Reminds me about Joachims style.

[Molako_Plus]

criztu i dunno man but you have some dumb crits.


"hair getting caught?"...like who cares man...do you wanna know how he pisses without rusting his legs aswell?

[criztu]

molako_plus > no-no, for example, you won't see a ninja wearing a cowboy suit, a cowboy wearing an indian suit, or a human wearing 2000 kg of weapons armour and ammunition... and a super machine gun on his shoulders, like classic robots do.

[ October 29, 2002: Message edited by: criztu ]

[pigbelly]

Wow!

Criztu:
I must say that was one of the strangest criticisms I have ever gotten so far :-?

I don�t really know if you are for real but maybe this will clear things up for you!

No! It was not to be a robot, you can se the pencil sketch at www.pigbelly.com.

Don�t think he cares if his hair gets caught in the thing on his shoulder! :-)

Doing angry war-faces is boring, and not that original either :-)

No his knees are not to thin!

Yes I do need to practice on every aspect of illustration and I�m planning to do so until I die :-)

Cheers
/Tommie

[ October 29, 2002: Message edited by: pigbelly ]

[ October 29, 2002: Message edited by: pigbelly ]

[Hyptosis]

Dude, it is sweet. Doesn't need any work. Overly large guns rock. Anyone, who is anyone.. knows that my man.

[gigatron]

medium?

[Cyberjobe]

GREAT.

[pigbelly]

gigatron:
Sketch done with pencils then for color Digital. (PhotoShop)

/Tommie

[Matthew]

Hey there, this is some real cool stuff.
Is it a weapon on his left foot?
cool stuff, keep up the good work.

take it easy
Matthew alias Lensflares alias Billy the kid

[Strawberrysauce]

ooOOOoooo, love this, and the work on your site, well done!

[nilpferd]

That's for sure a big weapon...

The character looks great, would love to see it finished!