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tRe
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 12:22 am     Reply with quote
ok.lurking is over.

this is my first post so I hope I get the link thing right.

learning the ropes...

c&c

sicilian pic

[ October 25, 2002: Message edited by: tRe ]
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Sumaleth
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 3:06 am     Reply with quote
A great picture to introduce yourself with.
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tRe
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 3:19 am     Reply with quote
hey...

thanks alot...

It is more of a sponteneus thing.trying the possibilities and stuff...

but still...for a first digi-paint not bad.

thanks again.coming from sumaleth - it means alot
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Bilbo
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 3:49 am     Reply with quote
Cool pic, welcome aboard.

Since you did ask for c&c , I'll say that the only thing that needs tweaking imo is the cropping of the image- it's as if he's struggling to contain himself within its frame, the plane of the image becomes a subject rather than a viewport.
if it's intentional, you should probably strengthen the effect to remove doubt, otherwise- go the other way by either giving him some more space, or by cropping some of the elbows etc, thus removing direct interaction between the image's edges and its contents.
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tRe
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 4:04 am     Reply with quote
hey bilbo...

thanks for the indepth crits...

the shoulder thing is intentional...kinda pulling in the neck and putting your hands in the pockets kinda stuff...

but somehow you do have a point .the whole thing comopositional is wrong...

still...I am leaving it be.I�ve noticed some errors to but do not have the patience to go trhough it, since it was just a study and getting a hang of this graphic pad thingie...

thanks a lot...

...I am going to learn a lot from this bbord.
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Max
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 9:51 am     Reply with quote
I like it a lot!
Very confident work !!!
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Cyberjobe
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 9:56 pm     Reply with quote
I like your style very much.
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tRe
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 12:15 am     Reply with quote
max and cyber

thanks guys...
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Molako_Plus
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 7:29 pm     Reply with quote
very cool-tacular...

welcome to the board amigo!

and keep them coming so i can copy and paste.

lol....
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