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tRe junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Oct 2002 Posts: 14 Location: Vienna
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 12:22 am |
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ok.lurking is over.
this is my first post so I hope I get the link thing right.
learning the ropes...
c&c
sicilian pic
[ October 25, 2002: Message edited by: tRe ] |
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Sumaleth Administrator
Member # Joined: 30 Oct 1999 Posts: 2898 Location: Australia
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 3:06 am |
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A great picture to introduce yourself with. |
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tRe junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Oct 2002 Posts: 14 Location: Vienna
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 3:19 am |
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hey...
thanks alot...
It is more of a sponteneus thing.trying the possibilities and stuff...
but still...for a first digi-paint not bad.
thanks again.coming from sumaleth - it means alot |
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Bilbo member
Member # Joined: 31 May 2000 Posts: 356 Location: Israel
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 3:49 am |
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Cool pic, welcome aboard.
Since you did ask for c&c , I'll say that the only thing that needs tweaking imo is the cropping of the image- it's as if he's struggling to contain himself within its frame, the plane of the image becomes a subject rather than a viewport.
if it's intentional, you should probably strengthen the effect to remove doubt, otherwise- go the other way by either giving him some more space, or by cropping some of the elbows etc, thus removing direct interaction between the image's edges and its contents. |
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tRe junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Oct 2002 Posts: 14 Location: Vienna
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 4:04 am |
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hey bilbo...
thanks for the indepth crits...
the shoulder thing is intentional...kinda pulling in the neck and putting your hands in the pockets kinda stuff...
but somehow you do have a point .the whole thing comopositional is wrong...
still...I am leaving it be.I�ve noticed some errors to but do not have the patience to go trhough it, since it was just a study and getting a hang of this graphic pad thingie...
thanks a lot...
...I am going to learn a lot from this bbord. |
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Max member
Member # Joined: 12 Aug 2002 Posts: 3210 Location: MIND
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 9:51 am |
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I like it a lot!
Very confident work !!! |
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Cyberjobe junior member
Member # Joined: 10 Feb 2002 Posts: 28 Location: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil
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Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 9:56 pm |
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I like your style very much. |
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tRe junior member
Member # Joined: 25 Oct 2002 Posts: 14 Location: Vienna
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Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 12:15 am |
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max and cyber
thanks guys... |
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Molako_Plus member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2002 Posts: 290 Location: Toronto (Polska)
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Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 7:29 pm |
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very cool-tacular...
welcome to the board amigo!
and keep them coming so i can copy and paste.
lol.... |
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