[Jami Noguchi]

Since it's up at Marvel.com, I can post it now.

I don't usually do this, but I'm really happy with the way this one turned out so I thought I'd share. The orignal pencils were done by Pat Olliffe and inked by Al Williamson. I underpainted it and got rid of the original lineart. so here we go. On sale in January.

[Brachypelman]

really cool

[Matthew]

yeah, really cool.

take it easy
Matthew alias Billy the kid

[B0b]

spiderman has no nose

how does he smell?

alful!

[[666]Flat]

There R perspective issues (the face ain't lined up with the costume-head), but your rendering style is pretty neato, I especially dig teh eye.

[Jami Noguchi]

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Originally posted by [666]Flat:
There R perspective issues (the face ain't lined up with the costume-head), but your rendering style is pretty neato, I especially dig teh eye.

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indeedy. i think i should have underpainted the whole face first before blocking in the costume. i realized that after i sent in the final comp, but it was too late

maybe i'll try another one for myself.

[neff]

some things i dont like:

-the eye seems to be displaced
-the anatomy of the head looks not like a girls one

mmh, its only my opinion ;-))

[Jami Noguchi]

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Originally posted by NeFF:
some things i dont like:

-the eye seems to be displaced
-the anatomy of the head looks not like a girls one

mmh, its only my opinion ;-))

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yeah, you're right about the head anatomy. i wish i could have changed that as well, but i don't think the penciler would have appreciated that. still trying to figure out how far i can push things with these covers. they can be really picky.

[Jami Noguchi]

hmmm... on second thought, maybe i'm not so happy with how this one turned out. the criticisms are spot on though.