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johan_san junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Oct 2002 Posts: 22 Location: Gresham Oregon
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Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 8:57 pm |
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Wow this forum has some amazing work...
I got me a scanner and ummm....here's my second attempt... (first attempt is in works in progress section...)
suposed to be a guilty marine sniper... but i still can't quite get the right facial expresion... um yeah... The Bolt-action rifle is total fiction and the scope looks preaty weird but just bear with me...
Crits, Comments, Corections, Anything would be greatly apreciated...  |
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Light member
Member # Joined: 01 Dec 2000 Posts: 528 Location: NC, USA
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Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 9:14 pm |
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Not bad. Good feel. Work on anatomy and basics. |
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Molako_Plus member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2002 Posts: 290 Location: Toronto (Polska)
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Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 9:30 pm |
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you cant just skip anatomy and work your way up to expressions of emotion.
its a big leap which your not ready to take young grasshopper...
just practice and practice.....your bound to suceed |
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johan_san junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Oct 2002 Posts: 22 Location: Gresham Oregon
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Posted: Mon Oct 21, 2002 9:38 pm |
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yes master...anatomy before expresions.
i just realized the thumb holding up the rifle is smaller than the thumb on the other side...
carelessness... 4 hours and i didn't catch that... dope...
thanks for crits |
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