[fazedesign]

This is my first piece in months since i've been confined to using the computer in work hours only because of my ever-growing RSI problems.

Tranquil ( a welcome change )

But anyway, I think I was getting a little annoyed with myself at not being able to do any art that wasn't angry, so tried to really give it a go, and it turned out just as I hoped. Hope you like it And if you dont, then its only really my opinion that counts. hehe.

[thor64]

I don't think you need those two sharp lines at the bottom and the top - less opacity, I guess. Also: The shadow produced by the leaves shouldn't be so dark (thin material). Otherwise great pic - very inspirering!

[Bare Bonez]

I like the idea and I agree with thor64 about the two lines. This is just an opinion, but I think it would look neater if you cropped the right side by say 33%.. This would make the silouette offset. Gives it a more dynamic feel 'cause the audiences eyes must move towards the lower right corner.. When it's centralized, the audience doesn't have to focus anywhere else.. Anyway, just my 2 cents.

[fazedesign]

The glow on the floor and ceiling are thre to give it a slightly odd surreal feeling. And realisticly, the leaves would not show up at all virtually, and that would be boring, so i made the shadow stand out more on purpose.

"When it's centralized, the audience doesn't have to focus anywhere else.."

Pretty much all my previous art is offset, and the meaning of this piece was to basicly go against everything i had ever done before, hence the symmetry and centralisation.