[Kitamard]

Hey i think that looks pretty good. But im not the one u should get c&c from.
But i think (from someone who doesnt know much) you need to make it stand out more if you know what i mean? its kinda blurry n stuff.

[Bare Bonez]

Very nicely done. Nice detail in the studded armour (or lack there of ). You captured the action fairly well.

I have a bit of a problem with the left arm. Not too sure why, but it looks detached. I think it should be point more in towards the screen, just because of her posture. Currently it doesn't seem natural.. I'm also unsure of the rest of her lower body. the pose seems fairly out of place.. Her torso points in one direction, but her waist is pointing in another, but I guess it could be possible, just not comfortable.. Dunno..

Maybe someone can give a second opinion on that. Good job though.

[Kari Christensen]

Something I'm doing for a game company. Please c&c.

[ October 18, 2002: Message edited by: Kari Christensen ]

[Max]

Cool!
Very well done !!!
It has a great atmosphere.
I like the hair and the coat of the women.

I am with bare's opinion at the pose.
It looks somehow...hard to describe.
It's an unusual pose.
She is ment to be attacking someone. or?
If so then she would hold the knifes in a different way.
Try this pose out yourself and you will see - it's hard to attack sb this way...

Anyway, if you add some more texture and detail it will be very very good.

Keep it up.

- max

[Jeise]

Her right arm is too long I think. If you had it pointing more to her side than straight back, it would look more natural. And a way you might accomplish that is to shorten it.
Also, her head is too small for her body.

I think the colours of the background complement the figure very well, but perhaps you could sharpen up the buildings a bit.

[hashas]

nice..

[ October 20, 2002: Message edited by: hashas ]

[Fredrik]

Nice, but if she is jumping upvards, shouldn't her hair be blowing downwards