[IkerCLoN]

This is a watercolor I made for University last week. Hope you can tell me what's ok and what's wrong...

[el scoono]

I think that overall this is a very strong piece. Your inking style is very good and the design of the cyclops character is great (love the expression on his face).

A few crits:

I was a little confused by the area where the cyclops' club goes behind his right leg. It's hard to tell where the club ends and the leg begins.

I think the pose of the little guy is very stiff when compared to the cyclops. His left arm in particular seems unnatural.

The way you stylized the clouds is cool. However, I'm not sure it fits with the overall style of the piece. The clothing, the characters and the trees are all drawn in a fairly realistic manner. I also think the thick outline on the clouds brings them a little too "forward" in the composition.

Just some minor points, they don't really detract from the illustration as a whole. Good work!

[ October 13, 2002: Message edited by: el scoono ]

[Soak]

like it a lot , esp. the cyclops left hand ( right from our view )

The only thing that ive to critizise are the feet of him . They look like a bunch of meat

And ye,like already said the clouds are to thick