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RATBAT member
Member # Joined: 28 Feb 2002 Posts: 69 Location: San leandro
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Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2002 3:26 am |
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im not really looking for a critique anymore, just showcasing. but helpfull tricks and suggestions is a bonus!
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Brachypelman junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2002 Posts: 29 Location: paris
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Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2002 3:45 am |
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cool page !! Maybe it should have a thread on comics pages... |
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Hunago member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2002 Posts: 154 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2002 5:18 am |
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Nice pages, the story concepts are interesting. Look forward to more. |
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Simoom member
Member # Joined: 18 Aug 2002 Posts: 302 Location: nc, usa
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Posted: Mon Oct 07, 2002 1:03 pm |
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Drawings great, as I would expect from your previous posts. But the speech bubbles are all squiggly maybe just straighten them out, usually people only have squiggly ones for major stresses or creepy tones, but you already did the pointy edges so it's not necessary. |
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