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Lomi · Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2002 12:34 am

Been a LONG time since I have seen any doodle dumps here... I know I suck but I will start anyways

normal rules apply... ridiculing/commenting/praising/critiquing/etc...

ChiaNi · Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2002 1:30 am

well Lomi. I try to get you back to my page. and beg your critique. but you are gone...

I went to your web site. there has all kind master artist there. I am so happy you share that website here.

about your drawing there. I like them. if I will try to pick any little thing about them. I think your side view head need rounder.

ChiaNi · Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2002 2:03 am

sorry about my drawing too. I use mouse on PhotoShop. But these side view what I think the back of head should rounder.

another thing. I think old people more saggy so their lip not full like youth. I find their low lep alway stick out. hehehe.

Their are lot master artist out there. and so do you Lomi. just exchange what I know.

Lomi · Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2002 2:13 am

ah thanks hehe, the "old guy" was actually just sort of like a sickly youngish d00d but hey thats cool anyways

thanks for the paintover definately made clearer what you were saying. I know I suck at drawing hair... something I need to work on, didnt realise the back of the head was so small until now either, thanks alot man!

now post some scans of your sketchbook

Lomi · Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2002 6:12 pm

got my scanner working, only 2 drawings on this page so far... but meh, and I know the shading on the top one is off... but I am at a loss as to how it SHOULD look :/

ChiaNi · Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2002 2:22 pm

I like your drawing. your drawing have expression that you really catch it.

here has some shadow not should can help you.

Lomi · Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2002 4:43 pm

wow... thank you so much, its nice to see there are still some people here who are willing to help out newbies

do you use any of those instant messenger programs like icq or aol instant messenger by chance?

NeoFun · Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2002 6:04 pm

Try more dynamic head positions while you are starting. Also, instead of having a doodle dump, you should try working on just one picture for a good 4-6 hours.

Lomi · Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2002 9:19 pm

thanks for the tip neofun, ya I know they aren't very dynamic but I am still kinda worries my anatomy is off... and it's kind of scary jumping into dynamics when I cant even shade properly yet, I suppose I should just skip shading until my lineart is on par. BTW do you mind me adding you to my contact list on aim... I would really appreciate being able to talk to you?

ChiaNi · Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2002 9:29 pm

Lomi I don't have ICQ, MSN. Yahoo, anymore.
I use love to chat. It take too much tome chating. So I delet all these stff.

I keep watch your art work post here.

NeoFun · Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2002 2:46 am

Sure, why not... I am NeoFun v7 on AOL IM