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Akolyte
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Design for a post apocalyptic abomination, sort of like a gorilla orc with cybernetic arm...His feet look too funny? Its for a contest, I want design done right before i put him in some sort of decent composition...Thx for feedback. Oh yeah, finally in art school if you care ;p
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FuzzBeast
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| Posted: Sat Aug 31, 2002 7:22 pm |
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Yeah Jerry, the left side leg looks a little twosted to the left, kinda off balance, i didnt notice it before but i see it now.
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chao chin
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| Posted: Sat Aug 31, 2002 7:26 pm |
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| yep.. the leg looks unbalance.. but i like the design.. it's cool!! |
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visual myriad
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| Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2002 2:55 am |
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| As per above, pose/balance is a little bit off, but some of those details are looking really nice (and congrats getting into art school). |
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GO
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| Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2002 3:10 am |
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nice design, cool work man.
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Akolyte
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| Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2002 7:31 am |
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| Thx guys, I'm glad you like the design, even if it is very corny/cliche lol. I'll rework his legs, and get a second, finalized painting done this next week hopefully. Thx for help. |
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eyewoo
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| Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2002 7:55 am |
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yea... very cool...
When you work on the legs, check out the length below the knee... Seems to me they are either too short, or the thighs (right thigh is) are too long. |
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PuC
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| Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2002 8:17 am |
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 Very cool work, I like the idea 2
maybe make a comic with him?
some comments that might help:
I'd make the legs much longer (but you probably heard that already  )
and work a little bit on the base of his right horn (something about it makes it look a bit strange), the axe, why is he holding it like that? and the fist around the axe, but thats not finished yet right?
Please keep us updated on your progress, I cant wait to see it finished.
[ September 01, 2002: Message edited by: PuC ] |
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Giant Hamster
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| Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2002 12:12 pm |
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| He's got Ninja Turtle feet. |
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mannela
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| Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2002 12:26 pm |
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His left arm looks cool.
Nice design, keep it up. |
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