[O_F_M]

very good!

[Ilija]

Hi,

again one of my first digital 2D works (normally 3D). I know its not very good but I want to show it anyway cause I hope to get some feedback and tips how to improve my work.



Thanks for every comment.

Ilija

[ceenda]

Ilija: This is very good indeed! I like it.

As for crits, I'd say don't get stuck with the "nitty-gritty", as we say over here. You've gone in for some very fine details, but by concetrating on too many little areas it's possible to forget the form of the piece as a whole.

Also, a background (perhaps even just a gradient of tones) is useful in helping to figure out lighting situations.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

[Ilija]

ceenda: Glad you like it. Im workink on an new Version. I'll try to Mention your Tips. Thanks.

O_F_M: Thank you.

[Christian Lang]

Great work, good structure and gloss. I like It! But the folds look little too sharp. they should influence the surrounding surface which looks a little too straight. Maybe you can add a little more light and shadow in that area. The gloss is fine, It�l help define the fold.