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bM · Posted: Mon Aug 12, 2002 3:17 pm

Woah, this is a sample of a new airbrushed image.
Featuring a goth waitress.

This is a draft from 3 hours.

The final will be 5 times as high with body, dress covered in blood and much more.

*Note* The head is not done yet. So please give me critiques so that i can fix it to next draft.

Sincerely
-bM

SiLeNt_UK · Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2002 4:37 am

Looks pretty excellent to me, i dont think u should mess with her head. No point in overdoing something that looks pretty perfect to me. Then again im a n00b and hugely impressed with a lot of stuff. The whole blood on dress thing sounds good - be sure to post it when finished.

francmidi · Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2002 6:45 am

Nice idea - gothic pinup

. Looks good. Is it "real" airbrush or "virtual" � Photoshop � airbrush?

IMO the mouth is a little too small and the face a little too long. Maybe I'm wrong with it. I hope you don't mind, that I made this paintover:

What do you think - better or not?

blok · Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2002 7:35 am

I think the mouth was not too big, i think it was too dark so you could not distinguished the upperlip from the underlip.

bM · Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2002 8:52 am

thx Francmidi, no i dont mind.. great way to learn. Yes im gonna redo the mouth in some way for the final.. thx.

Here is Draft 2.. ive started on the body a little. Any thought..

Asurfael · Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2002 8:54 am

It's looking good so far. I agree with the lips though. And also, I think you accidentally posted it to the wrong section?

bM · Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2002 8:58 am

Damn.. sorry for that ppl..
Anyway i can move this shit to correct forum?

Sincerely
-bM

Jabo · Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2002 1:57 pm

Lovit! Could you arrange a date?

bM · Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2002 5:28 pm

Hey, this is my third Draft on my third airbrush image. Featuring a gothic waitres/maid.

Final image will have a bloody dress and a cool bakground.. Any tips on a good background is welcome.
As background im thinking one of the following scenario:
Red velvet curtains, big ass windows with bars.
outside a BIG moon is shining with an evil grin and grey color. Shading the hallway with dark colors.

How does that sound?

i know this draft suxxes.. but i just wanted some input so i can continue in the morning
Specially the dress, i just pastled out where i wanted my marks.. gonna be much better. i ensure u that

*Note* No part is fully done yet as you can see. So please give me critiques so that i can fix it to next draft.

Thanks

Sincerely
-bM

Andromeda · Posted: Tue Aug 13, 2002 8:06 pm

I cant wait to see the finished version ...
i will make sure to EMAIL you if you dont post a finished version =]
hehehhehe

love her posture.

keredleung · member Member # Joined: 25 Jul 2002 Posts: 70 Location: HK

cool drawing. i like the color tone especially.
Hair and eyes should be more detail.
Look forward to see her bloody body

[ August 13, 2002: Message edited by: keredleung ]

keredleung · member Member # Joined: 25 Jul 2002 Posts: 70 Location: HK

hi Nalfaren.
Its a great job. I like the pose, but i found some strange between the body and her head. the dimension not match.
i cannot tell u where the problem is, coz i am junior. And i think her hand is a little bit big.anyone agree with me?
Anyway i like this waitress very much.
and i do an animate for fun.

[ August 14, 2002: Message edited by: keredleung ]

v1510nAry · Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2002 10:36 am

The lighting on 'her' left eye, it seems to be rather too dark, taking in the fact the finger which is behind her chin doesn't seem to be that dark at all, compared with the shading around the left eye region.

morphine · Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2002 1:52 pm

She looks like a 20's actress for me. heh

j/k.

What's her clothes made of? Black leather or vynyl? (vynyl, most probably because it's too shiny to be leather)

Will you keep this blurry look or will you do details and sharpen her face a bit more? It's ok if you keep it, but I think it'd be cool if you put more detail exclusively on her hair.

Oh, btw post a hi-res version when you finish it. (a low to post and a hi to link, if it's not asking much.

)

bM · Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2002 2:01 pm

thx, haha awesome animation

A MUST SAVE

Yeah i will post final high res when done.
I think its gonna be done this weekend.
Ill continue to post my drafts until then.

I here have a draft 4, that i made as an image. I darkened the whole and made it smaller. (this is not how the final will look).

i just wanted to see if it fits in someones taste..

Thx

Sincerely
-bM

bouncemonster · Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2002 8:28 pm

That is amazing, truly magnificent. But... I wanted to say something about the hand. It's good and all, but a bit BIG. Size it down a bit, then it'd be thumbs up, many, many thumbs! And are you the guy who did the The Antioch Chronicles pictures?

DeepFish · Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2002 8:53 pm

im waiting for those bloodstains

hopefully u gonna make them a more brownish/red color, as if its an old blood.

B3AND1P · Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2002 9:26 pm

SHouldn't this be in "Work in Progress"?

bM · Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2002 2:36 am

B3andip. yeah i know sorry, i got a previous post concerning this. i posted a final image here before and bookmarked it. Then when i was to up this i used the bookmark. sorry :<

I am sorry to say that i didnt do the Antioch Chronicles :<

About the hand, im gonna see what i can do

The clothes are latex or lack or something.
Plastic

Thx for all comments, im looking forward to completing this image.

Sincerely
-bM