[casefr]

as in my last post some of you seems to be unsatisfied, i tried to finish my picture.
so here is the louise brooks portrait


and a bad colored version :


comments and crits are welkom
Case!

[Max]

Hello

That's a good portrait.
I don't know louise brooks - she looks beautiful.
Alright, I just think that the left part of her face especially the lower jaw is a bit too blured.

good work

-max

[Odie]

it looks good. My only concern though is that the eye that's covered by her hair looks lik it's not there at all. Like there's no indication that there's an eye just behind her hair (not ample shading in that area).