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jae · junior member Member # Joined: 12 Jun 2002 Posts: 3

Heres a piece I just finished

StrangeFate · member Member # Joined: 20 Feb 2000 Posts: 199

verrry sweet

SouL · Posted: Mon Jul 29, 2002 9:55 pm

That seriously rocks.

Sumire-chan · Posted: Mon Jul 29, 2002 9:56 pm

Very cool use of color^^ It is very scenic^^ Done with Photoshop???

donk · Posted: Mon Jul 29, 2002 11:16 pm

mmmmmm, not noob. MARVELOUS

Asurfael · Posted: Mon Jul 29, 2002 11:26 pm

Stunning, absolutely stunning. One thing though: Maybe the horse should cast a stronger shadow on the ground? Although the very light shadow does suit the feeling in the image. Uh, and the horse's legs look a tad bit off (like its right hind leg was almost in the same level as its left front leg, even if judging by the body they're not) but you don't notice that one easily (I only noticed it while viewing the image in that small box below the reply, where i saw it in two parts).

Lovely use of colours, especially with the clouds and the lighting. Very athmospheric, too.

Ian Jones · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 1:26 am

WOW! nice....

Very cool use of palette, it really makes the atmosphere, that and the volumetrics... cool.

I think you should work a little more on the background and those foreground elements like the swords and the skulls (cheesy alert!).

The skulls look cliche because they appear very 'placed' and they all face upwards with jawbones relatively intact, also they appear without an obvious relation to any other bones. spines or other bones? It would also be nice to see maybe some chipping of the bone surface. The cranium is made up of several layers I think, so strip away some little fragments from the upper layer... that always looks nice to make them weathered. You could also take a gash out of one or two, like an axe hit them or something. They need to look a little more dirty too, with varitaions of local colour and value to add a sense of realism.

What are those white lines on the ground? They seem pointless and kinda distracting.

Overall it is very nice! fantastic job!

neff · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 1:54 am

awesome, ist really scary me

hAx0r · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 2:12 am

Very nice. Dig the perspective, really pumps up the power and might in it.

Germ01 · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 4:49 am

WoW! Awesome piece! I went to your site too and it kicks! Hey are you the same Jae who used to be in comics? If you are I wondered where you went

Jabo · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 7:01 am

W00t, this is nice, really really nice! How long did it take you?

Chuckles · junior member Member # Joined: 31 May 2002 Posts: 15

excellent....

I love the colors you used...

I can't mention anything constructive, because all the points, have already been mention...

Loxley · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 10:45 am

In the midst of all the trashy, hacked out work that suffocates this forum nowadays, this is a superbly refreshing change. Please post more.

[ July 30, 2002: Message edited by: Loxley ]

kana · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 10:49 am

very nice mood. something about the lighting bothers me though.

gLitterbug · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 1:15 pm

OH MY GOD!

It�s fantastic, absolutely great! Superb use of colors and great design and composition! I�m outta words now :O

Sharper-Image · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 1:48 pm

*Visual Orgasm*

Enayla · Posted: Tue Jul 30, 2002 11:09 pm

Gah... gorgeous composition, LOVELY colours... me likes.