[GUYJIN]

Inspired by a fantasy novel by Jennifer Roberson.

and a close up...

[xXxPZxXx]

pretty solid. I don't know if you wanted any crits or comments even but I like them both.

if anything her neck is a tad small IMO but I am not the anatomy gods here.

love the swords too,

-PZ-

[Asurfael]

I agree on the neck comment on the lady. Also, there's something funky with her right arm. Don't know what.

As for the guy, he's having some major anatomical issues with his arms and back.



As you can see by the lines, his chest is way off-centered, judging by his head/neck and his pelvis. That'd make the backbone curve rather unnicely (shown in green). The red horizontal lines show a problem with perspective. The pelvis is straight, but on his upper torso the lines going from an equal point to another start to turn upwards, while they should be even or even going slightly downwards. EDIT: Forgot the purple lines. They show that the arms are exactly the same lenght, as the perspective would suggest that the hind one should be shorter.

Anyway, I'm not good at explaining, hope you don't mind a quick quick overpaint:



It's a bit off too, but I think you'll get the point.

Feel free to ignore me though, it's 9.30 AM and I haven't slept all night...

[ July 28, 2002: Message edited by: Asurfael ]

[Atherium]

I think the problem with her right arm is the elbow joint, the perspective is off for the position he arm is in. At that angle I don't think you would see her elbow joint at all.

On the close up I have a problem with her left eye (our right) it is at too high of an angle, just needs to be dropped down slightly, and dido for the above anatomy structure. A quick light pencil sketch of a wire frame for each figure will really help prevent this.

The style is pretty good though man, keep it up