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DeepFish
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 Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2002 9:34 pm |
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It's great to become a member of an online community. 
http://www.geocities.com/stanley550/1.jpg
I posted this picture (above) on another forum, and got some good criticism on it. So yeah, i know her rib cage is a bit too long, and also is her neck... another mistake that i made was the shadow on her right arm... I shouldn't have used such a heavy color, especially since her biceps is not colored at all. Robot is not "not finished" the idea was to make him fade into the darkness... but since i decided not to make background dark, he is fading into fog
http://www.geocities.com/stanley550/waiting.jpg
Second picture is a work in progress. Most probably i'll do it in the same style as the first one. I must admit that the biggest inspiration for her was the "Tank Girl". she is supposedly sitting on the edge of a roof of multistory building, waiting for her mark to appear on the streets. 
All critique and comments will be greatly appreciated and taken into account. I'm not "fragile", heh.
[ July 28, 2002: Message edited by: DeepFish ] |
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DeepFish
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GUYJIN
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| Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2002 10:42 am |
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I like the woman hanging in the air...
The 1st one I guess is Brom inspired?
The colored one I think is the least succeslfull one, its a bit flat...
over all, not bad at all... |
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Swarm
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| Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2002 1:21 pm |
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| I really love the second one, great mood in it. |
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Beowulfthefallen
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| Posted: Sat Jul 27, 2002 4:59 pm |
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| Wow! I love that stuff. Especially the second one. I also love the way you draw boots. Very stylish |
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DeepFish
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| Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2002 2:12 am |
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| Thanks for comments guys, i really do apreciate it |
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eyewoo
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| Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2002 8:55 am |
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| hmmm... can't see them.... broken links... |
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Diruo
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| Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2002 9:20 am |
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I'd like to comment but I get a:
"The website you have requested has exceeded its daily bandwidth quota of 100MB and has been temporarily de-activated." error message.
I suggest you get find a better place to store your image files. |
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DeepFish
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| Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2002 10:27 am |
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I'm sorry about broken links. i added a link underneat each picture, to it on my geocities account...
I have accounts with netfirms (which bandwidth is not enough as it seems) and with geocities, which doesn't allow to directly link to the pictures...
If you can recommend a good free website host, i'd be glad to try it out. Thanks. |
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Coquelicot
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| Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2002 10:44 am |
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A good free host is http://www.fateback.com
60 megs of free space, and I do believe unlimited bandwidth. Sometimes they can be kind of slow, though. |
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Loxley
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| Posted: Sun Jul 28, 2002 12:29 pm |
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Some of them are alright. Way too many things wrong anatomy/perspectivewise with the first picture though.
Messed up perspective on floating womans face also screws that image, but the lighting almost makes up for that. |
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