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Germ01
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 Posted: Wed Jul 24, 2002 8:03 pm |
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Reference was used....good ol Victoria's Secret. This will eventually be colored. I just wanted some feedback. Thanks!
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Germ01
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| Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 7:22 am |
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| Is it that bad? |
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JProvost
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| Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 8:21 am |
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I know how hard getting comments can be, so I'll help you out. It's looking great, there's just a few things I want to point out.
Her midriff (below that white stripe on her top) could be made much more interesting with some wrinkles and ruffles in the fabric. Regardless of how it looks in the referance, what's to say you can't improve on it?
The same goes for her legs. Some more folds and drapery work could be done between her legs (moreso on her left side, I guess) at the top, and maybe around her right knee. Right now the highlight by that knee looks out of place, it's not adding depth or giving the fabric life.
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Germ01
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| Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 9:59 am |
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| Thanks for the comment! You're right about the folds. I'm just wondering if I should make the adjustments now or when I do the coloring. Anyways thanks again! |
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X -ECUTIONER
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| Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 10:22 am |
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| very sexy image.love the witch theme,find it very intriguing. |
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Psionic
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| Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2002 4:34 pm |
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| Cant wait to see this witch coloured no crits other than what was mentioned..... |
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