Sijun Forums :: View topic - First Post- Fire & Water

Serenity · Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 8:29 pm

Hi everyone. I'm just starting to get the hang of this thing called art. I would love some feedback on my picture. It would help me become a better artist.

This one I did with a pencil and Adobe photodeluxe 3.0.

Whatcha guys think?

Atherium · Posted: Thu Jul 25, 2002 9:35 pm

I think it is great, and your use of color to seperate the two characters works really well.

The only question is the one on the left, why is her hair going straight up?

Fate · member Member # Joined: 16 Mar 2001 Posts: 168

Wow! This is such an awsome pic!!! I mean how can you just start out and do this well? The color, the style, the composition, heck, it's not just perfect it's beyond perfect! Pure brilliance man, I would love to see more of your work. Keep it up! Yeah!

neff · Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2002 1:13 am

wow!
cant believe my eyes!
this is absolutly awesome!
a new star of anime is born,
show more!

Serenity · Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2002 9:06 am

Thanks for the comments.

I was trying to make her fire more powerful than it came out, in my first sketch it showed it better so I wanted her hair to stand out because of it.

Raoul · Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2002 1:44 pm

Guess why her hair goes up in the air?!
She just powered up to super sayajin mode, you see her concentrated energy beneath her feet