[apocalypse newt]

hi guys havent posted here for a while probably dont remember me when i did but - heres a drawin i did today- crits and comments are more than welcome!


link to image!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

there i think i finally fixed this dont think the pic came up most of the time so!.



[ July 27, 2002: Message edited by: apocalypse newt ]

[Funk Master Kane]

nice attempt. But you need to fix his chest and arms cause it looks like they are on backwords. the outline of the sleeves arnt supposed to go into the chest that far, try to pudh them out a little. his shoulders should slop down from the neck, and his shirt should slope in also. And pleas give this poor guy some elbows and more visible knuckles. and as for the saber, the cord should not wrap around his arm, it should be hanging behind it, cause if he were to fight he would loose all circulatin to his arm from it being so tight.

do those things and the pidture would be mutch improved. Hope this helps you. Keep on drawin.

[Fate]

OMG!!! This is so freakin awsome!!! I love everything about it! The line work, the coloring, and the design elements as well! Like the sweet ass lightsaber and the really cool looking skull thing!! Are you a pro? Because you could certainly sell those drawings to some big name game company or something!
Oh man, post more of your fantastic artworks! I know you have lots!
keep on drawing man!

[apocalypse newt]

hi thanks for the tips - idont agree with em all but there real helpful!

and no im not a pro actually ive never even taken an art class ! hope u werent being sarcastic.....